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In today's world pressure of modern life are negatively impacting family life

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It is undeniable that in today's era modernisation is first priority for an individuals. Nowadays influence of modern world insert bad impact on the life of families I strongly concent from the given extent and shall be illustrate in proceeding notions. There are countless negative impact of modern life the first and foremost is spend hefty sum of money this is to say that due to arrival of modernisation people are fond of doing show off among the other people and wants to show their high social status due to this they spend money blindly or taking debt from banks only because to full fill their needs expensive needs. Secondly, the most hazardous impact of this is on the youth they step in the norcotics to put it in another word, people enter in drugs due to show their superior status this become the dangerous issue. As a piece of evidence, people start doing parties in highly expensive hotels and inviting there friends only to show how luxury they live life. Moreover, western culture demolished the cultural rituals among the people although social communications skills. This is to say, people are busy in there lavish life style they do not have time either to make phone call to their relatives or spend some quality time with them. These all the skills are disappearing amid the people. As a result people lossing there moral ethics. To sum up, modernisation is not favourable if it do in cross limits everything is suites in a particular limitations.
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today
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modernisation
is
first
priority for
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an individuals
. Nowadays influence of modern world insert
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bad
impact on the
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life
of families I
strongly
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concent
from the
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given
extent and shall be
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illustrate
in proceeding notions. There are countless
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negative
impact of modern
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life
the
first
and foremost is
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spend
hefty sum of money this is to say that due to arrival of
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modernisation
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people
are fond of doing
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show
off among the other
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people
and wants to
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show
their high social status due to this they spend money
blindly
or taking debt from banks
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only
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because
to full fill their needs expensive needs.
Secondly
, the most hazardous impact of this is on the youth they step in the
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norcotics
to put it in another word,
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people
enter in drugs due to
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show
their superior status this become the
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dangerous
issue. As a piece of evidence,
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people
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start
doing parties in
highly
expensive hotels and inviting there friends
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only
to
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show
how luxury they
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live
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life
.
Moreover
, western culture demolished the cultural rituals among the
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people
although social communications
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skills
. This is to say,
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people
are busy in there lavish
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life
style they do not have time either to
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make
phone call to their relatives or spend
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some
quality time with them. These all the
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skills
are disappearing amid the
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people
.
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a result
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people
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lossing
there moral ethics. To sum up,
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modernisation
is not
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favourable
if it
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do
in cross limits everything is suites in a particular
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limitations
.
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IELTS essay In today's world pressure of modern life are negatively impacting family life

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
254 words
5.5
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