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In this set of materials, both the reading passage and the lecture discussed the replacement of gasoline with ethanol.

In this set of materials, both the reading passage and the lecture discussed the replacement of gasoline with ethanol. WyGAK
In this set of materials, both the reading passage and the lecture discussed the replacement of gasoline with ethanol. The reading passage firmly criticize this replacement, however the lecture repudiated what stated in the reading resting upon fallacious premises and provides three counterclaims proofing that ethanol is an excellent alternative to be used instead of gasoline. Firstly, the reading argued that if we started to use ethanol largely, we would cause more environmental problems, as one of the emission of ethanol combustion is carbon dioxide which is in fact one of the greenhouses; therefore, we would trap more heat in the atmosphere. The professor contradicted this point by acknowledging that as ethanol is being produced by corns, so if we want to produce more of that fuel we would have to harvest more corn plants consequently, the corns plants would use more case carbon dioxide from air as one sources of their nutrition. Secondly, the article claimed that if we used corns for producing ethanol fuel, there would be a dramatic reduce of the amount of plants available for other uses like feeding farm animals. Notwithstanding the professor highlighted that, in the process of ethanol production some parts of the corn plant that are not eaten by animals like caws and chicken, are being used, so this two procedure will not interfere each other at all. Lastly, the reading contended that usage of ethanol is not economically convincing if the government stop subcidizing this fuel. This seem to be incorrect as explained in the lecture. The speaker articulate that in near future the demand for ethanol fuel will rise, so that factories would have to increase their production; consequently even if the government stop its taxes, the price of ethanol fuel would decrease to a high extent.
In this set of materials, both the
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reading
passage and the lecture discussed the replacement of gasoline with
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ethanol
. The
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reading
passage
firmly
criticize this replacement,
however
the lecture repudiated what stated in the
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reading
resting upon fallacious premises and provides three counterclaims proofing that
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ethanol
is an excellent alternative to be
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used
instead
of gasoline.

Firstly
, the
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reading
argued that if we
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started
to
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use
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ethanol
largely
, we would cause more environmental problems, as one of the emission of
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ethanol
combustion is carbon dioxide which is in fact one of the greenhouses;
therefore
, we would trap more heat in the atmosphere. The professor contradicted this point by acknowledging that as
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ethanol
is
being produced
by
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corns
,
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so
if we want to produce more of that
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fuel
we would
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have to
harvest more
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corn
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plants
consequently
, the
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corns
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plants
would
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use
more case carbon dioxide from air as one sources of their nutrition.

Secondly
, the article claimed that if we
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used
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corns
for producing
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ethanol
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fuel
, there would be a dramatic
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reduce
of the amount of
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plants
available for other
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uses
like feeding farm animals. Notwithstanding the professor highlighted that, in the process of
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ethanol
production
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some
parts of the
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corn
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plant
that are not eaten by animals like caws and chicken, are being
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used
,
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so
this two procedure will not interfere each other at all.

Lastly
, the
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reading
contended that usage of
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ethanol
is not
economically
convincing if the
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government
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stop
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subcidizing
this
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fuel
.
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to be incorrect as
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explained
in the lecture. The speaker articulate that in near future the demand for
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ethanol
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fuel
will rise,
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so
that factories would
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have to
increase their production;
consequently
even if the
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government
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stop
its taxes, the price of
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ethanol
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fuel
would decrease to a high extent.
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IELTS essay In this set of materials, both the reading passage and the lecture discussed the replacement of gasoline with ethanol.

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297 words
6.0
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