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In this present era, people started preferring bicycle to travel a short distance.

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In this present era, people started preferring bicycle to travel a short distance. Therefore, few nations begin a project to makes easy use of a bicycle, and they spend a large amount of money on that project. This essay will enshrine why this scenario happened and also give my opinion on that idea, which is described in the following paragraphs. To embarks with, plenty of reasons which indicated bicycle use is reasonable. First and foremost, The pollution rate is increasing all countries, which generated from transport vehicles, therefore citizens move to bicycle to reducing the amount of pollution. Furthermore, the accident rate is growing On a daily basis, which hams people, and bicycle is the best option for reducing accident in particular areas. For example, people from the USA started using bicycles in 2018, which created an impact on their pollution and accident rate which falls. On the other hand, numbers of steps which will more effective for declined transport problems. Firstly, if governments make free public transportation then the public want for their destinations by public transport, which will reduce traffic on the road, ultimately accident problem will be solved. For instance, since India provide free transport service to their citizens, and then the amount of pollution and accident was reduced, which was written in the survey of the University of Gujarat in 2018. To conclude, although using a bicycle is reduces the traffic issue, free transfer service is better than bicycle use. Using a bicycle helps to improve air quality and safety but in a limited way.
In this present era,
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people
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started
preferring
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bicycle
to travel a short distance.
Therefore
, few nations
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begin
a project to
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makes
easy
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use
of a
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bicycle
, and they spend a large amount of money on that project. This essay will enshrine why this scenario happened and
also
give my opinion on that
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idea
, which is
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described
in the following paragraphs.

To embarks with,
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plenty
of reasons which indicated
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bicycle
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use
is reasonable.
First
and foremost, The
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pollution
rate is increasing all countries, which generated from
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transport
vehicles,
therefore
citizens
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move
to
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bicycle
to reducing the amount of
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pollution
.
Furthermore
, the
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accident
rate is growing On a daily basis, which hams
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people
, and
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bicycle
is the best option for reducing
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accident
in particular
areas.
For example
,
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people
from the USA
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started
using
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bicycles
in 2018, which created an impact on their
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pollution
and
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accident
rate which falls.

On the other hand
, numbers of steps which will more effective for declined
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transport
problems.
Firstly
, if
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governments
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make
free public transportation then the public want for their destinations by public
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transport
, which will
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reduce
traffic on the road,
ultimately
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accident
problem will
be solved
.
For instance
, since India provide free
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transport
service to their citizens, and then the amount of
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pollution
and
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accident
was
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reduced
, which
was written
in the survey of the University of Gujarat in 2018.

To conclude
, although using a
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bicycle
is
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reduces
the traffic issue, free transfer service is better than
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bicycle
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use
. Using a
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bicycle
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helps
to
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improve
air quality and safety
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but
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in a limited way
.
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IELTS essay In this present era, people started preferring bicycle to travel a short distance.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
259 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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