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In this present era, people prefer to take food, which has good packaging.

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In this present era, people prefer to take food, which has good packaging. Therefore, the waste of food packaging is increasing in many countries. This essay will enshrine the main possible causes of it as well as a solution to that problem which described in the following paragraphs. To embarks with, plenty of harmful things are happening due to this scenario. First and foremost, if people used food packaging and threw into the garbage than that will be a home of mosquito, which spread various diseases such as malaria, dengue, etc. Furthermore, the food packaging materials were made from plastics, which generates air pollution, which is harmful to humans, animals, and birds too. For example, 50% of plastic in the world are produced in India therefore India has the highest pollution among other countries. On the other hand, various steps which reduce the effect of that causes. Firstly, if the government of any country makes a reasonable change of garbage collection, which helps to reduce the population of mosquitoes in particular areas. ultimately, the disease problem will be solved. secondly, authorities have to make strict rules for use of plastic bags, which will reduce the amount of pollution, and humans and other creature can live peacefully in the world. To conclude, the waste of food packaging creates lots of problem but that can be solved by various steps. for packaging increase pollution and diseases ratio. that can declined by the excellent garbage chain and less use of plastic.
In this present era,
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people
prefer to take
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food
, which has
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good
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packaging
.
Therefore
, the waste of
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food
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packaging
is increasing in
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many
countries. This essay will enshrine the main possible causes of it
as well
as a solution to that problem which
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described
in the following paragraphs.

To embarks with,
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plenty
of harmful things are happening due to this scenario.
First
and foremost, if
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people
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used
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food
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packaging
and threw into the garbage than that will be a home of mosquito, which spread various diseases such as malaria, dengue, etc.
Furthermore
, the
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food
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packaging
materials
were made
from
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plastics
, which generates air
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pollution
, which is harmful to humans, animals, and birds too.
For example
, 50% of
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plastic
in the world
are produced
in India
therefore
India has the highest
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pollution
among other countries.

On the other hand
, various steps which
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reduce
the effect of that causes.
Firstly
, if the
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government
of any country
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makes
a reasonable
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change
of garbage collection, which
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helps
to
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reduce
the population of mosquitoes
in particular
areas.
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ultimately
, the disease problem will
be solved
.
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secondly
, authorities
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have to
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make
strict
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rules
for
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use
of
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plastic
bags, which will
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reduce
the amount of
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pollution
, and humans and other creature can
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live
peacefully
in the world.

To conclude
, the waste of
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food
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packaging
creates
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lots of problem
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but
that can
be solved
by various steps.
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for
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packaging
increase
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pollution
and diseases ratio.
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that
can declined by the excellent garbage chain and less
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use
of
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plastic
.
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IELTS essay In this present era, people prefer to take food, which has good packaging.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
248 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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