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In this day and age, the food industry is flourishing with the improvement of technological advances that facilitate the blooming of a variety of goods.

In this day and age, the food industry is flourishing with the improvement of technological advances that facilitate the blooming of a variety of goods. 3YLal
In this day and age, the food industry is flourishing with the improvement of technological advances that facilitate the blooming of a variety of goods. Meat production has become an important element of food consumption, and it is said that this field is taking up space needed for crop cultivation, necessitating a reduction. In this essay, I will offer some recommendations for lowering meat intake on a regular basis, as well as some difficulties that may arise as a result of these answers. To begin, reducing meat consumption would be a good strategy to slow down the world's meat output. For starters, if the government raises the tax on utilizing land for manufacturing, businesses may modify their business models. A excellent example is the Netherlands, where an average farmer must pay an additional $5, 000 for each hectare added to the prior amount of land. However, those approaches may fall short of successfully discouraging people from eating meat. For one thing, social media users have a cynical element in them, and they question everything they see on such networks. While vege-burgers have the best chance of appeasing a meat lover's taste senses, they cannot entirely replace it. There is also fear that fruits and vegetables may not be able to provide all of the critical nutrients and minerals present in meat, poultry, and fish, resulting in a new health catastrophe. In conclusion, meat consumption may be reduced by eating vegetarian cuisine and paying a higher price for it, even if it creates certain issues such as reluctance to quit and overall dissatisfaction.
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intake on a regular basis,
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consumption would be a
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good
strategy to slow down the world's
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meat
output. For starters, if the
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government
raises the tax on utilizing land for manufacturing, businesses may modify their business models.
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excellent example is the Netherlands, where an average farmer
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pay an additional $5, 000 for each hectare
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added
to the prior amount of land.

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, those approaches may fall short of
successfully
discouraging
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people
from eating
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meat
. For one thing, social media users have a cynical element in them, and they question everything they
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see
on such networks. While
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vege-burgers
have the best chance of appeasing a
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meat
lover's taste senses, they cannot
entirely
replace it. There is
also
fear that fruits and vegetables may not be able to provide
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all of the
critical nutrients and minerals present in
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, poultry, and fish, resulting in a new health catastrophe.

In conclusion
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consumption may be
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reduced
by eating vegetarian cuisine and paying a higher price for it, even if it creates certain issues such as reluctance to quit and
overall
dissatisfaction.
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IELTS essay In this day and age, the food industry is flourishing with the improvement of technological advances that facilitate the blooming of a variety of goods.

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