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Cyberbullying - Book Review

Cyberbullying - Book Review 2KpoA
It was a sunny and lovely Sunday afternoon, Delaney was sitting in front of her laptop, chatting with her friends. Everything seemed normal until… her best friend, Arwen sent a picture of Delaney in a weird pose. Delaney was confused because Arwen promised that she wouldn't spread the picture. Everyone in the chatting group started to say mean things and make jokes about her. Delaney began to feel uncomfortable and decided to have a conversation with Arwen. After they talked to each other, it turned out that Arwen did that because she thought she got 2 in the last exam because of Delaney and wanted to get revenge (wow, a very funny reason). Delaney explained the problem and got some apologies from Arwen. Later, Arwen explained the whole story to their other friends and everyone said sorry to Delaney. PART 1: SUMMARIZE OF THE BOOK Cyberbullying has been a really annoying and irritating problem for students nowadays. This has become increasingly common, especially among teenagers. YOU. One of you could be a victim of cyberbullying too, and worse than that, some of you could even be a cyberbully. However, I believe that none of us want to see or be another victim of this problem, and we must want to know and do more research about it. Well, then you shouldn’t miss the book “Cyberbullying” on MyOn, The book basically has 5 main contents; What is Cyberbullying? Are you the cyberbully? How Cyberbullying actually works. The Effects of Cyberbullying. Taking control! What is Cyberbullying? - It is like online bullying or harassment using the social internet. Cyberbullying can happen in many ways, spreading mean messages, rumors, and threats about you for example. It usually begins from plenty of preposterous reasons…. Are you the cyberbully? - Have you ever…. Forwarded and embarrassing messages or photos without his/her permission? Spread mean rumors about a classmate? Used technology to send anonymous threats to someone you don’t like? And a lot more couple of reasons to make you a cyberbully. Imagine there’s a 100 things list that a cyberbully has done at least 1 time, and you’re already a cyberbully if you’ve done 7 of them. How Cyberbullying actually works - You can use technology for tons of positive purposes, but it can also gives bullies an edge. You can simply become a baddie with just a few clicks. Besides, in cyberbullying, cyberbullies can easily hide who they are. But, the bullies don’t always do the work. Sometimes, they ask their friends to spread mean messages or photos on a social networking site for them. The Effects of Cyberbullying - Cyberbullying always leads to a consequence. The victims often experience emotional problems. They may feel scared, depressed, or anxious, which makes them might stop studying and pull away from their friends. Most cyberbullying victims can’t just ignore it and go on with life as usual like a normal person… Taking Control! - The book also contains a few tips on how to control a cyberbullying situation: Just go get some help. Don’t keep quiet! Talk to a counselor, your parents, or other trusted adults or report to website monitors. Especially when you receive hurtful e-mails or messages, just don’t read and delete them. Part 2: What I Like/Dislike about the book: What I like: Easy to understand - Even though the book is a bit wordy but they explained everything quite simple and straightforwardly. It also does not contain too much advanced or complicated vocabulary and grammar, so I believe this book is suitable for everyone. . . The book consists of many examples - This is the thing that I like the most about the book. Examples portray problems through illustrations or texts for us to understand how they work or happen. The book will give you some Cyberbullying situations or even put you in them, to see how will you deal and improvise with them. Some examples are based on true stories, too! What I dislike: Some pages contain text that has a too-small size, which sometimes is quite difficult for me to read. According to Google, your eyes must be at least 20 inches or 51 centimeters from the monitor, and plus, the MyOn book is like… this [insert example], and the text in the book (which I am talking about) is like this. And that is my “Cyberbullying” MyOn book review. Thank you for your listening and if you like it, you can find and read the book to understand more about Cyberbullying and it may helps you to avoid it or even save some victims from it!
It was a sunny and lovely Sunday afternoon, Delaney was sitting in front of her laptop, chatting with her
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friends
. Everything seemed normal until… her best
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friend
,
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Arwen
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sent
a picture of Delaney in a weird pose. Delaney
was confused
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because
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Arwen
promised that she wouldn't spread the picture. Everyone in the chatting group
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started
to say
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mean
things and
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make
jokes about her. Delaney began to feel uncomfortable and decided to have a conversation with
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Arwen
. After they talked to each other, it turned out that
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Arwen
did that
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because
she
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thought
she
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got
2 in the last exam
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because
of Delaney and wanted to
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get
revenge (wow, a
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very
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funny
reason). Delaney
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explained
the
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and
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got
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some
apologies from
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Arwen
. Later,
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Arwen
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explained
the whole story to their other
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friends
and everyone said sorry to Delaney.

PART 1: SUMMARIZE OF THE BOOK

Cyberbullying has been a
really
annoying and irritating
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problem
for students nowadays. This has become
increasingly
common,
especially
among
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teenagers
. YOU. One of you could be a
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victim
of cyberbullying too, and worse than that,
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some
of you could even be a
cyberbully
.
However
, I believe that none of us want to
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see
or be another
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victim
of this
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problem
, and we
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must
want to know and do more research about it. Well, then you shouldn’t miss the
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book
“Cyberbullying” on
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MyOn
,

The
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book
basically
has 5 main contents;

What is Cyberbullying?

Are you the
cyberbully
?

How Cyberbullying actually works.

The Effects of Cyberbullying.

Taking control!

What is Cyberbullying?
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-
It is like online bullying or harassment using the social internet. Cyberbullying can happen in
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many
ways, spreading
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mean
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messages
, rumors, and threats about you for
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example
. It
usually
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begins
from
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plenty
of preposterous reasons….

Are you the
cyberbully
?
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-
Have you ever….

Forwarded and embarrassing
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messages
or photos without his/her permission?

Spread
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mean
rumors about a classmate?

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Used
technology to
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send
anonymous threats to someone you don’t like?

And a lot more couple of reasons to
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make
you a
cyberbully
. Imagine there’s a 100 things list that a
cyberbully
has done at least 1 time, and you’re already a
cyberbully
if you’ve done 7 of them.

How Cyberbullying actually works
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-
You can
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use
technology for tons of
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positive
purposes,
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but
it can
also
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gives
bullies an edge. You can
simply
become a baddie with
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just
a few clicks.
Besides
, in cyberbullying, cyberbullies can
easily
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hide
who they are.
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But
, the bullies don’t always do the work.
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Sometimes
, they ask their
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friends
to spread
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mean
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messages
or photos on a social networking site for them.

The Effects of Cyberbullying
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-
Cyberbullying always leads to a consequence. The
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victims
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often
experience emotional
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problems
. They may feel scared, depressed, or anxious, which
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makes
them might
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stop
studying and pull away from their
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friends
. Most cyberbullying
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victims
can’t
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just
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ignore
it and go on with life as usual
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like
a normal person…

Taking Control!
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-
The
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book
also
contains a few tips on how to control a cyberbullying situation:

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Just
go
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get
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some
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help
. Don’t
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keep
quiet! Talk to a counselor, your parents, or other trusted adults or report to website monitors.

Especially
when you receive hurtful e-mails or
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messages
,
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just
don’t read and delete them.

Part 2: What I Like/Dislike about the book:

What I like:

Easy to understand
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-
Even though
the
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book
is a bit wordy
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but
they
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explained
everything quite simple and
straightforwardly
. It
also
does not contain too much advanced or complicated vocabulary and grammar,
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so
I believe this
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book
is suitable for everyone.
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.
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.


The
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book
consists of
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many
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examples
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-
This is the thing that I like the most about the
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book
.
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Examples
portray
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problems
through illustrations or texts for us to understand how they work or happen. The
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book
will give you
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some
Cyberbullying situations or even put you in them, to
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see
how will you deal and improvise with them.
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Some
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examples
are based
on true stories, too!

What I dislike:

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Some
pages contain text that has a too-
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small
size, which
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sometimes
is quite difficult for me to read. According to Google, your eyes
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must
be at least
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20 inches
or 51 centimeters from the monitor, and plus, the
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MyOn
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book
is like… this [insert
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example]
, and the text in the
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book
(which I am talking about) is like this.

And
that is
my “Cyberbullying”
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MyOn
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book
review. Thank you for your listening and if you like it, you can find and read the
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book
to understand more about Cyberbullying and it may
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helps
you to avoid it or even save
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some
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victims
from it!
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IELTS essay Cyberbullying - Book Review

Essay
  American English
27 paragraphs
768 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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