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in the school’s education about learning information technology can bring the knowledge about the technology tools such as computer

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Sufficient data exists to overwhelmingly support the belief that study and participation in the fine arts is a key component in improving learning throughout all academic areas. However, I accept that they need to acknowledge practical subjects such as information technology. The Information Age can bring a new advancement for a country. In the school’s education about learning information technology can bring the knowledge about the technology tools such as computer
Sufficient data exists to
overwhelmingly
support the belief that study and participation in the fine arts is a key component in improving learning throughout all academic areas.
However
, I accept that they need to acknowledge practical subjects such as information technology.

The Information Age can bring a new advancement for a country. In the school’s education about learning information technology can bring the knowledge about the technology tools such as
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computer
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IELTS essay in the school’s education about learning information technology can bring the knowledge about the technology tools such as computer

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
70 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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