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In the salad days of millennium, society is polarised into two groups almost equally regarding the notion that products are new in some ways whether this is a positive or negative development.

In the salad days of millennium, society is polarised into two groups almost equally regarding the notion that products are new in some ways whether this is a positive or negative development. DNEd6
In the salad days of millennium, society is polarised into two groups almost equally regarding the notion that products are new in some ways whether this is a positive or negative development. Different people have their distinct mindset. The following paragraphs would elucidate both the approach. First of all, consider it as a positive development. There are myriad things to be shared in its favour. Firstly, nowadays marketing is more important to sell your product in the market. Consequently, companies faced lots of difficulties if they do not advertise their product. Secondly, the recent situation suggests that most people watch television. once a day, so with the help of television marketing at least every person sees a product. As a result, when they go for shopping so they buy similar products or the same products. In addition, companies are making different ways for marketing their product like social media. Some companies also make advertisements to defend their competitors like Macdonalds and Burger King. Shifting towards the second school of thought, this is a negative development. The company emphasizes their product but they do not give quality as much as required. They promote or they launching their products in many ways but it is not proof that their product is good. They spend lots of money on marketing. However, they spend money to improve their product. So everybody purchases more and more. According to the survey of U. S. marketing agencies that most of the company spend 40% amount towards market their product. As a result, they got only 20% increase in their sales. To conclude both the approach is useful. Someone takes it positively or somebody takes it negatively. To recapitulate, I would like to state that government and individuals both should put their best foot forward together in order to curb the menace.
In the salad days of millennium, society is
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into two groups almost
equally
regarding the notion that
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products
are new in
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some
ways whether this is a
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positive
or
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negative
development.
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Different
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people
have their distinct mindset. The following paragraphs would elucidate both the approach.

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First of all
, consider it as a
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positive
development. There are myriad things to
be shared
in its
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favour
.
Firstly
, nowadays
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marketing
is more
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important
to sell your
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product
in the market.
Consequently
,
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companies
faced lots of difficulties if they do not advertise their
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product
.
Secondly
, the recent situation suggests that most
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people
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watch
television.
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once
a day,
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so
with the
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help
of television
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marketing
at least every person
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sees
a
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product
.
As a result
, when they go for shopping
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so
they
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buy
similar
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products
or the same
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products
.
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,
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companies
are making
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different
ways for
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marketing
their
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product
like social media.
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Some
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companies
also
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make
advertisements to defend their competitors like
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Macdonalds
and Burger King.

Shifting towards the second school of
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thought
, this is a
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negative
development. The
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company
emphasizes their
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product
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but
they do not give quality as much as required. They
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promote or
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they launching
their
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products
in
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many
ways
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but
it is not proof that their
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product
is
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good
. They spend lots of money on
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marketing
.
However
, they spend money to
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improve
their
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product
.
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So
everybody
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purchases
more and more. According to the survey of U. S.
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marketing
agencies that most of the
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company
spend 40% amount towards market their
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product
.
As a result
, they
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got
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only
20% increase in their sales.

To conclude
both the approach is useful. Someone takes it
positively
or somebody takes it
negatively
.

To recapitulate, I would like to state that
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government
and individuals both should put their best foot forward together in order to curb the menace.
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IELTS essay In the salad days of millennium, society is polarised into two groups almost equally regarding the notion that products are new in some ways whether this is a positive or negative development.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
304 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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