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In the provided picture the stages of making dough for pizza are presented. The whole process takes seven steps and the necessary amount of ingredients are highlighted.

In the provided picture the stages of making dough for pizza are presented. The whole process takes seven steps and the necessary amount of ingredients are highlighted. XqAwA
In the provided picture the stages of making dough for pizza are presented. The whole process takes seven steps and the necessary amount of ingredients are highlighted. To begin with, organisational stages provide the list of ingredients one should be prepared with before cooking starts. The first step is to mix 4 cups of flour combined with one and a half cups of water, adding 2 tsp of salt and a half of dry active yeast into a stand mixer. Overall, all the constituents should be mixed for nine minutes, decreasing the speed for the final two minutes up to slow mood. Then, the fifth stage of cooking is premerially to let the dough double in size waiting for at least 2 hours to rise. After that period, an individual is up to press the dough making all the air bubbles disappear. The final stage is to cut it in 3 equal pieces and then your pizza dough is ready to be covered with the filling.
In the provided picture the
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stages
of making
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dough
for pizza
are presented
. The whole process takes seven steps and the necessary amount of ingredients
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are
highlighted.

To
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begin
with,
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organisational
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stages
provide the list of ingredients one should
be prepared
with
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before
cooking
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starts
. The
first
step is to mix
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4 cups
of flour combined with one and a half cups of water, adding 2 tsp of salt and a half of dry active yeast into a stand mixer.
Overall
, all the constituents should
be mixed
for nine minutes, decreasing the speed for the final two minutes up to slow mood. Then, the fifth
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stage
of cooking is
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premerially
to
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let
the
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dough
A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
double in size
waiting for at least 2 hours to rise.

After that period, an individual is up to press the
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dough
making all the air bubbles disappear. The final
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stage
is to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cut
it in 3 equal pieces and then your pizza
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dough
is ready to
be covered
with the filling.

IELTS essay In the provided picture the stages of making dough for pizza are presented. The whole process takes seven steps and the necessary amount of ingredients are highlighted.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
166 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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