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The weather is sunny in the picture. The men on the left are drinking beer and talking. The man is wearing green shirt, hat and pants. The other man is wearing yellow suit. The people on the right are having a picnic and drinking beer. The man is wearing gray undershirt and shorts. He is sitting, smiling and holding a globe. The woman is wearing yellow dress. She is sitting and smiling. The man is wearing orange shirt and yellow pants. He looks depressed. The woman in the middle is walking also wearing purple dress and an apcon.

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men
 on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 are drinking beer and talking. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfatherbrothersonguyfellowhusband
man
 is wearing green shirt, hat and pants. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfatherbrothersonguyfellowhusband
man
 is wearing yellow suit. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 on the right are having a picnic and drinking beer. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfatherbrothersonguyfellowhusband
man
 is wearing gray undershirt and shorts. He is sitting, smiling and holding a globe. The woman is wearing yellow dress. She is sitting and smiling. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfatherbrothersonguyfellowhusband
man
 is wearing orange shirt and yellow pants. He looks depressed. The woman in the middle is walking also
 wearing purple dress and an Possible spelling mistake found.apron
apcon
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