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The picture about paragraph

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The weather is sunny in the picture. The men on the left are drinking beer and talking. The man is wearing green shirt, hat and pants. The other man is wearing yellow suit. The people on the right are having a picnic and drinking beer. The man is wearing gray undershirt and shorts. He is sitting, smiling and holding a globe. The woman is wearing yellow dress. She is sitting and smiling. The man is wearing orange shirt and yellow pants. He looks depressed. The woman in the middle is walking also wearing purple dress and an apcon.
The weather is sunny in the picture. The
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men
on the
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left
are drinking beer and talking.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
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man
is wearing green shirt, hat and pants.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
other
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man
is wearing yellow suit.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
on the right are having a picnic and drinking beer.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
man
is wearing gray undershirt and shorts. He is sitting, smiling and holding a globe. The woman is wearing yellow dress. She is sitting and smiling. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
man
is wearing orange shirt and yellow pants. He looks depressed. The woman in the middle is walking
also
wearing purple dress and an
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apcon
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IELTS essay The picture about paragraph

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
98 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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