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In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

The pursuit of knowledge is a concept that is valued by mist cultures In the 21st century, we now have many more options regarding how and where to link that knowledge. II you are a French national, you can apply to du an economics degree in the USA and likewise an American citizen can take a course in linguistics in France Indeed most universities across the world now have a good proportion of foreign students enrolled in their programmes. Certainly, there are numerous advantages of studying in a diferent country. Many students choose to do this because they know that a particular university, for instance Stanford Business School has an excellent reputation. Graduating from here they believe, will increase their chances of securing a decent position in a company back home. Students studying abroad also have the opportunity to form friendships with people of various nationalities: in time. these may develop into useful professional networks. Furthermore living far from family and friends can enable young people to become more independent and self-sufficient Unfortunately, the experience of studying abroad is not always a positive one Research suggests that a small percentage of young people struggle to adapt to their new environment and sulfer from severe culture shock. The situation can become worse il the student is not mature enough to cope by themselves. Different approaches to teaching and learning may also come as an unwelcome surprise to some students In essence, the key 10 a good experience at a foreign university is a open mind a student is presented with this opportunity they should certainly seize if.
The pursuit of knowledge is a concept that
is valued
by mist cultures In the 21st century, we
now
have
many
more options regarding how and where to link that knowledge. II you are a French national, you can apply to
du
an economics degree in the USA and
likewise
an American citizen can take a course in linguistics in France
Indeed
most universities across the world
now
have a
good
proportion of foreign
students
enrolled in their
programmes
.

Certainly
, there are numerous advantages of studying in a
diferent
country.
Many
students
choose to do this
because
they know that a particular university,
for instance
Stanford Business School has an excellent reputation. Graduating from here they believe, will increase their chances of securing a decent position in a
company
back home.
Students
studying abroad
also
have the opportunity to form friendships with
people
of various nationalities: in time.
these
may develop into useful professional networks.
Furthermore
living far from family and friends can enable young
people
to become more independent and self-sufficient

Unfortunately, the experience of studying abroad is not always a
positive
one Research suggests that a
small
percentage of young
people
struggle to adapt to their new environment and
sulfer
from severe culture shock. The situation can become worse
il
the
student
is not mature
enough
to cope by themselves.
Different
approaches to teaching and learning

may
also
come
as an unwelcome surprise to
some
students
In essence, the key 10 a
good
experience at a foreign

university is
a
open mind a
student
is presented
with this opportunity they should
certainly
seize if.
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IELTS essay In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

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