Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

In the past students tend to study in their own country after graduation .now students are moving to abroad due to more opportunities. Describe advantages and disadvantages

In the past students tend to study in their own country after graduation. now students are moving to abroad due to more opportunities. Describe advantages and disadvantages Q5LDb
In the cutting edge era, number of students are migrating to foreign countries as compare to past when scholars preferred to study in their own country. This essay intends to analyse advantages and disadvantages in the upcoming paragraphs. To commence with, there are certain advantages to study in abroad due to numerous facilities and opportunities. In other words, multifarious scholars are moving to different countries for their graduation due to developed countries which provide them number of comforts to study. For example, according to the recent survey, 90% students of India are moving to other countries. Moreover, quality of study in foreign countries is available which is not in India and study in other countries is cheaper than India. Therefore, students prefer to go to abroad for their further studies. On the other hand, thee are various demerits of studing in abroad. Bond of child with parents become weak. To explicate it, number of students who are studing in abroad do not respect their parents and even they do not call them and do many unnecessary things. For instance, according to the headline of 'The Tribune' migration of students made relations weaker with their parents. In addition to this, moving of literate individual from their country to other country will made their own country undeveloped and illiterate. Thus, government should provide opportunities to the students. To conclude, in the past when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they are going to abroad for their further studies due to more opportunities, which have some disadvantages also.
In the cutting edge era, number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
are migrating to foreign
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
countries
as compare to past when scholars preferred to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
in their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
. This essay intends to
Possible spelling mistake. 'analyse' is British English.
analyse
advantages and disadvantages in the upcoming paragraphs. To commence with, there are certain advantages to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
abroad
due to numerous facilities and opportunities. In
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
words, multifarious scholars are moving to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
countries
for their graduation due to developed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
countries
which provide them number of comforts to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
.
For example
, according to the recent survey, 90%
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
of India are moving to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
countries
.
Moreover
, quality of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
in foreign
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
countries
is available which is not in India and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
countries
is cheaper than India.
Therefore
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
prefer to go to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
abroad
for their
further
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
studies
. On the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
hand, thee are various demerits of
Possible spelling mistake found.
studing
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
abroad
. Bond of child with parents become weak. To explicate it, number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
who are
Possible spelling mistake found.
studing
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
abroad
do not respect their parents and even they do not call them and do
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
unnecessary things.
For instance
, according to the headline of 'The Tribune' migration of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
made relations weaker with their parents.
In addition
to this, moving of literate individual from their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
will
The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "make"
made
their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
undeveloped and illiterate.
Thus
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should provide opportunities to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
.
To conclude
, in the past when
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
did a university degree, they tended to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
study
in their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
. Nowadays, they are going to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
abroad
for their
further
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
studies
due to more opportunities, which have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
disadvantages
also
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay In the past students tend to study in their own country after graduation. now students are moving to abroad due to more opportunities. Describe advantages and disadvantages

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
263 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • 5band
    : Reading is more educational than watching videos or TV.
    Many people believe that visual information can be conveyed more efficiently than word. For me, I strongly agree with the statement because it is more interesting to enjoy and it delivers the information more easily than reading. To most people, watching an educational video or image is more enjoya...
  • 5.5band
    information technology has changing our lives
    Information Technology becoming part of our life in many aspects like home, leisure and also in work activities. The main advantage of Information technology is exchange the all kinds electronic data. There are some security concerns which is the main drawback of Information Technology. With the he...
  • 5.5band
    KFC- Describe appearance and food
    Nowadays, life gets too busy, and that’s why the fast-food industry has become successful in recent years. People prefer to take food away and come to their office to eat. There are brands built to satisfy people’s needs, and KFC (Kentucky Fried Chicken) is one of the most popular food brands that s...
  • 5band
    disadvantages of electirc cars?
    Although electric vehicles are going to be widespread, they have some downsides. One major drawback of these cars is that they should be charged continually. This is because they run on electricity to propel and deplete charge. On the other hand, there is not sufficient infrastructure, for instance ...
  • 6band
    Some people think that better face to face communication while communication with advanced that technology
    It is generally argued by certain groups of masses that, it is better way to face to face communication rather than communication with the helps of advanced technology such as a telephone or email. I hold my complete consent with this statement for the reasons mentioned in forthcoming paragraph in t...
  • 6band
    Many animals are in danger of extinction. What are the causes and what solutions can solve this problem.
    Many animals are currently in the verge of extinction. So how do the government handle this issue effectively from it variant causes? Animals are now having a high risk of extinction because of some reasons. First many people who are not getting sufficient knowledge about animal’s role are usually ...