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In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is a positive trend?

In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. DA1p

Going shopping was not highly unheeded. Although, doing purchase has been significant activity between all nations. I suppose that is mesmerizing tendency. For earlier generations, acquiring products, perfumes or another something have been vital, because it can help to people to learn life experiences and balances. Initially, customers can find anything from everywhere such as, shopping mall, supermarkets, cafe and they are making money enjoyable to them. Secondly, more parents have a full-time work and they are busy to spend time to their children, relatives. In my experiences, it is normal to see families in the local shopping mall, cafes or other places at weekends. Another negative reason of increase shopping, spend money to unnecessary thing it leads to fatal effects to their life balance.

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shopping
 was not highly
 unheeded. “Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although
, doing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 has been significant activity between all nations. I suppose that is
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because
 it can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to learn life experiences and balances. Initially
, customers can find anything from everywhere such as, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
shopping
 mall, supermarkets, 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 and they are making money enjoyable to them. Secondly
, more parents have a full-time Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).work, and
work and
 they are busy to spend time to their children, relatives. In my experiences, it is normal to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 families in the local You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
shopping
 mall, 'cafes' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "cafés"cafés
cafes
 or other places at weekends. Another This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 reason of increase You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
shopping
, spend money to unnecessary thing it leads to fatal effects to their life balance. 