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In the past people would save money to buy something special Now people are more likely to buy items using a credit card

In the past people would save money to buy something special Now people are more likely to buy items using a credit card 5Bw5P
In the ancient era people would save money for future and buy something special However, in this modern epoch people can buy items using credit card. I shall explain in the forthcoming paragraph why people buy items using credit card and it is a positive trend. There are plentiful reasons, why people buy more items with help of credit card as compare to past. First and foremost, it is helpful in the emergencies situations. For instant, one man can go for regular check up and it might be face any urgency in hospital so, it is very useful. Furthermore, they have save credit point in the card even thought that credit point is help in they are anywhere in the world places. Secondly, people who are middle class or lower class so they can buy any expensive item with installment such as washing machine, refrigrator and any heavy equipment. Although, in the credit card no limit in amount of money, they should buy expensive items with use of virtual money. For instance, one boy go in apple store and he likes macbook whereas he can easily buy that macbook. In contrast, some drawback of credit card. Likewise, if it is laid off in any place. so, stranger can easily pay in anywhere. Consequently, be careful for the use of card in the modern era. On the flip side, in the past people would save money. Firstly, in this era all have a middle class and they are not stock with the materialistic things. If, they have earn good amount, so they think that it might be helpful to buy something special thing in the future. For example, they have. good agriculturist they earn gigantic amount. However, they save that cash in the bank for future. In contrast, modern man is a stiking with materilatic thing To sum up, credit card is useful in this epoch. In addition, it might be helpful in any emergency condition but it is used with care. However, they have laud off anywhere so, any fraud causing activity with the credit card.
In the ancient era
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money
for future and
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buy
something special
However
, in this modern epoch
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people
can
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buy
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items
using
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credit
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card
. I shall
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explain
in the forthcoming paragraph why
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people
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buy
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items
using
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credit
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card
and it is a
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positive
trend.

There are plentiful reasons, why
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people
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buy
more
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items
with
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help
of
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credit
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card
as compare to past.
First
and foremost, it is helpful in the emergencies situations. For instant, one
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man
can go for regular
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check
up and it might be
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face
any urgency in hospital
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so
, it is
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very
useful.
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, they have
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save
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credit
point in the
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card
even
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thought
that
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credit
point is
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help
in they are anywhere in the world places.
Secondly
,
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people
who are middle
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class
or lower
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class
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so
they can
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buy
any expensive
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item
with installment such as washing machine,
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refrigrator
and any heavy equipment. Although, in the
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credit
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card
no limit in amount of
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money
, they should
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buy
expensive
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items
with
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use
of virtual
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money
.
For instance
, one boy go in
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apple store
and he likes
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macbook
whereas he can
easily
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buy
that
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macbook
.
In contrast
,
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some
drawback of
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credit
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card
.
Likewise
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is laid
off in any place.
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so
, stranger can
easily
pay in anywhere.
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, be
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careful for
the
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use
of
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card
in the modern era.

On the flip side, in the past
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people
would
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save
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money
.
Firstly
, in this era all have a middle
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class and
they are not stock with the materialistic things. If, they have
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earn
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good
amount,
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so
they
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think
that it might be helpful to
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buy
something special thing in the future.
For example
, they have.
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good
agriculturist they earn gigantic amount.
However
, they
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save
that cash in the bank for future.
In contrast
, modern
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man
is a
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stiking
with
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materilatic
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thing


To sum up,
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credit
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is useful in this epoch.
In addition
, it might be helpful in any emergency condition
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but
it is
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used
with care.
However
, they have
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laud
off anywhere
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so
, any fraud causing activity with the
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credit
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card
.

IELTS essay In the past people would save money to buy something special Now people are more likely to buy items using a credit card

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
346 words
5.0
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