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In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computers, the internet and smart phones, more and more people are starting to work from home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

Past of decade people are always travel to their working places. Nowadays, technologies are development side - by - side with it's that people are working at home First of all, workers are flexible when work at home. Base on the pandemic of Covid - 19 all bussiness workers should stay at home to prevent the illness, but if the workers are all off the work it's will caused the bussiness shut down so come from the speech of governement, all bussiness need to working online. For example, the CEO want a talk with workers, thier need to download an application to use it, also can communicated, present in the video chat On the other hand, working offline is more trusthworthy and certificated. Because working offline is easy to talk about the problem, clearly what problem we step on it. For instance, signing a contracted we need face - to - face each other to have an authenticated contracted, not just say by words or online signed To wrap up, working online is convinience, flexible with some freelancer like not to based on some thing or be controlled by someone. But if working online in a big busssiness is not easy, so in my opinion i prefer to work offline to have an authenticated with other bussiness worked
Past of decade
people
are always travel to their
working
places. Nowadays, technologies are development side
-
by
-
side with it's that
people
are
working
at home

First of all
,
workers
are flexible when work at home. Base on the pandemic of
Covid
-
19 all
bussiness
workers
should stay at home to
prevent
the illness,
but
if the
workers
are all off the work it's will caused the
bussiness
shut down
so
come
from the speech of
governement
, all
bussiness
need to
working
online
.
For example
, the CEO want a talk with
workers
,
thier
need to download an application to
use
it,
also
can
communicated
, present in the video chat

On the other hand
,
working
offline is more
trusthworthy
and certificated.
Because
working
offline is easy to talk about the problem,
clearly
what problem we step on it.
For instance
, signing a contracted we need face
-
to
-
face each other to have an authenticated contracted, not
just
say by words or
online
signed


To wrap up,
working
online
is
convinience
, flexible with
some
freelancer like not to based on
some thing
or
be controlled
by someone.
But
if
working
online
in a
big
busssiness
is not easy,
so
in my opinion
i
prefer to work offline to have an authenticated with other
bussiness
worked
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IELTS essay In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computers, the internet and smart phones, more and more people are starting to work from home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

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