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In the past everyone wore clothes according to their culture, but now everyone wear similar clothes round the world.

In the past everyone wore clothes according to their culture, but now everyone wear similar clothes round the world. 1b60N
In the past everyone wore clothes according to their culture, but now people wear similar clothes all around the world. So lets elaborate the given topic in following paragraph. Lets start from our past clothing habits. In the early time everyone was not allowed to wear what they wanted or what they desired. Clothing system was divided into many different type of clothes. Poor people were not allowed to wear what rich people write not only in clothing only there were many differences between rich and poor. More or less there are many religion and culture in our world who does not allow everyone to wear, eat, stay same way. For example: - in the past time dalits were not allowed to wear cotton clothes like rich people were. Everything has two sides positive and negative. Like coins has two different sides heads and tales. In this era of fat and fancy world everyone wants to get dressed well and smart. In today's era no one really cares about anyone hire an individual is dressed or what is his clothing manner. An individual of this century wears what he wants an poor person can also wear cotton clothes they also have their homes now. For example: - a Dalit community cultured person can also wear cotton clothes if he want in this present time. To encapsulate, from my point of vision everybody should get right to erase what they want and wherever they want. Everybody should be treated in equal manner in this era.
In the past
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everyone
wore
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clothes
according to their culture,
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but
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now
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people
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wear
similar
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clothes
all around the world.
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So
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lets
elaborate the
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given
topic in following paragraph.

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Lets
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start
from our past clothing habits. In the early time
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everyone
was not
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allowed
to
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wear
what they wanted or what they desired. Clothing system
was divided
into
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many
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different
type of
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clothes
. Poor
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people
were not
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allowed
to
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wear
what rich
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people
write not
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only
in clothing
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only
there were
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many
differences between rich and poor. More or less there are
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many religion
and culture in our world who does not
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allow
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everyone
to
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wear
, eat, stay same way.
For example
:
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-
in the
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past time
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dalits
were not
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allowed
to
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wear
cotton
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clothes
like rich
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people
were.

Everything has two sides
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positive
and
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negative
. Like coins has two
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different
sides heads and tales. In this era of
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fat
and fancy world
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everyone
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wants
to
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get
dressed well and smart. In
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today
's era no one
really
cares about anyone
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hire
an individual
is dressed
or what is his clothing manner. An individual of this century
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wears
what he
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wants
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an
poor person can
also
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wear
cotton
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clothes
they
also
have their homes
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now
.
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:
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-
a
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Dalit
community cultured person can
also
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wear
cotton
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clothes
if he
The pronoun 'he' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "wants", "wanted".
want
in this present time.

To encapsulate, from my point of vision everybody should
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get
right to erase what they
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want
and wherever they
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want
. Everybody should
be treated
in equal manner in this era.
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IELTS essay In the past everyone wore clothes according to their culture, but now everyone wear similar clothes round the world.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
254 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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