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In the near future digital media will completely replace printed media

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Some people claim that one day the printed media will be completely replaced by digital media. However, in my opinion, there is still a large part of population that really appreciate reading a printed book, sniffing the smell of its pages, and in this, there is something of traditional and ritual. On the other hand, the digital world can give us a lot of sources, we are not limited to one book at time but we have million of sites and on line encyclopedia from which the same argument can be read. There is a "search" function as well, and you have not obliged to read a lot of pages searching tha only information you are interestered in, but clicking one button, you can find whatever you want. To sum up, I think that we have to use the digital means without forgettig the fascinating printed books.
Some
people
claim that one day the printed media will be completely replaced by digital media.
However
, in my opinion, there is
still
a large part of population that
really
appreciate reading a printed book, sniffing the smell of its pages, and in this, there is something of traditional and ritual.

On the other hand
, the digital world can give us
a lot of
sources, we are not limited to one book at time
but
we have
million
of sites and on line encyclopedia from which the same argument can
be read
. There is a
"
search
"
function
as well
, and you have not obliged to read
a lot of
pages searching
tha
only
information you are
interestered
in,
but
clicking one button, you can find whatever you want.

To sum up, I
think
that we
have to
use
the digital means without
forgettig
the fascinating printed books.
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IELTS essay In the near future digital media will completely replace printed media

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