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in the modern world, we should never be impolite to another person.

in the modern world, we should never be impolite to another person. 15bB7
From my perspective, being polite to others is a symbol of the civilized society. Therefore, both for our own goods and for others', we should never to impolite to another person in the modern world. My arguments for this point are listed as follows. First of all, polite manner brings about civilized comforts, which contributes to a more harmonious and peaceful society. Imagine how glad you are when servants greet you as soon as you step in the restaurants. How proud you are when your children thank teachers for their help. And how pleasure you are when others ask you for help by saying “. . .
From my perspective, being polite to others is a symbol of the civilized society.
Therefore
, both for our
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own
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goods
and for others', we should never
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to impolite to
another person in the modern world. My arguments for this point
are listed
as follows.

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First of all
, polite manner brings about civilized comforts, which contributes to a more harmonious and peaceful society. Imagine how glad you are when servants greet you as
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soon
as you step in the restaurants. How proud you are when your children thank teachers for their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
. And how pleasure you are when others ask you for
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help
by saying “.
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IELTS essay in the modern world, we should never be impolite to another person.

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  American English
2 paragraphs
107 words
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