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A/D patience is usually not a good strategy. We should take action now rather than later.

A/D patience is usually not a good strategy. We should take action now rather than later. 6xK2G
The reason why people take actions immediately without thinking twice is beyond me. From my perspective, patience is necessary, since it calms people down to think carefully and help us to complete the task smoothly. Therefore, I cast doubts on the statement that we should take action now rather than later. And my arguments for this point are listed as follows. First of all, in China there is a saying that "haste makes waste. " Sometimes if we hurry to finish something, we may do a bad job in the end. To shed light on it, I'd like to take my friend Peter as an example. Peter works as an audi. . .
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IELTS essay A/D patience is usually not a good strategy. We should take action now rather than later.

Essay
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113 words
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