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In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. JnBD
It is true that in the recent times, the verbal communication is almost vanished as virtual communication came into the picture. To a large extent I do believe this phenomenon is true. My inclination is elaborated in the ensuing paragraphs. The first reason why this occurs, most importantly, photos are non-verbal type of communication device. This is to say that without saying a word the picture can deliver a plenty of information. For instance, many of the famous painters have capability to transfer their views with the help sketching those idea to canvas or on board. Furthermore, this seems to be more effective way than to speak continuously. In addition to this, movie makers make a short film or series to share the public opinion very easily. To elaborate, they can manipulate the idea in which the way we think. For example, many political leaders currently create a short movie and keep it on through several areas. Thus, due to many visitors everyone can see it and constantly remind to vote that person. On the other hand I can not overlook other side too. The power of pen and written material can not be completely diminished. That is, now also the writing material have same impact on humans as nothing can match with printed material. To illustrate, one writer can change the personality of person that means with his words he can convert common man to famous person and vice-versa. To cap it all, writing has its own importance as it is one of the oldest way of communication. To sum up, despite the fact that, writing impact is much more powerful tool as compared to others, I still believe that other way of communication is priority for others. As it does not demand the skill, which is use for writing. My arguments proves that in the modern world the portrait has more impact than others.
It is true that in the recent times, the verbal
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
communication
is almost vanished as virtual
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
communication
came into the picture. To a large extent I do believe this phenomenon is true. My inclination
is elaborated
in the ensuing paragraphs.

The
first
reason why this occurs, most
importantly
, photos are non-verbal type of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
communication
device. This is to say that without saying a word the picture can deliver a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
plenty
of information.
For instance
,
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many
of the
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famous
painters have capability to transfer their views with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
The verb 'help' is used with an infinitive: "to sketch" or "sketch".
sketching
those
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
to canvas or on board.
Furthermore
, this seems to be more effective way than to speak
continuously
.

In addition
to this, movie makers
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
a short film or series to share the public opinion
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
easily
. To elaborate, they can manipulate the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
in which the way we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
.
For example
,
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many
political leaders
currently
create a short movie and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
it on through several areas.
Thus
, due to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
visitors everyone can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
it and
constantly
remind to vote that person.

On the
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other
hand I can not overlook
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other
side too. The power of pen and written material can not be completely diminished.
That is
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
also
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
writing
material have same impact on humans as nothing can match with printed material. To illustrate, one writer can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
the personality of person that means with his words he can convert common
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
man
to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
person and vice-versa. To cap it all,
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writing
has its
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
importance as it is one of the oldest way of communication.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
To
sum up, despite the fact that,
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writing
impact is much more powerful tool as compared to others, I
still
believe that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
way of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
communication
is priority for others. As it does not demand the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
, which is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
writing
. My arguments
You should probably use "prove".
proves
that in the modern world the portrait has more impact than others.
What do you think?
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  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word.

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316 words
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