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In the modern life, advertising become more prevalent with businesses. It is true that these model advertising are greatly contribution to bring products brand to potential customer, thus leading to boost productivity sale. I believe that this model provides us much positive than negative. This essay will shed light on this situation before give the author’s oppinion.

In the modern life, advertising become more prevalent with businesses. It is true that these model advertising are greatly contribution to bring products brand to potential customer, thus leading to boost productivity sale. I believe that this model provides us much positive than negative. This essay will shed light on this situation before give the author’s oppinion. OwoAE
In the modern life, advertising become more prevalent with businesses. It is true that these model advertising are greatly contribution to bring products brand to potential customer, thus leading to boost productivity sale. I believe that this model provides us much positive than negative. This essay will shed light on this situation before give the author’s oppinion. On the one hand, there are certain many reasons why for company decided using advertising tools to symphasise their products. First and foremost, the products value is improved thanks to the advertising. In fact, the products are advertisered in TV, radio, even social media always get a highly recommened for customers. Secondly, it is extremely clear for viwers when access detail related to products in advertising tools. Obviously, throughly advertisement so that a large amount of people can know clearly about the products they etheir want or do not want to buy. Despite the aforementioned benefits, using advertising also bring both businesses and customer numerous negative. Firstly, customers face to buy low-quality product and loss the faith with advertisiment. The products with high cost but the quality not good, for example, marketing programme introduce a perfect product with buyer and take the truth into products of them, but after all these bad products are bought by buyer. Furthermore, the company may be lost their position in market. It is undeniable that a huge customer are lost and the company have to cope with reduce sale. In conclution, advertising is able to help boost products along with increase the sale of businesses. However, I recomemmend that the company should take an account before decide advertisement any their products.
In the modern life, advertising become more prevalent with businesses. It is true that these model advertising are
greatly
contribution to bring
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products
brand to potential
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customer
,
thus
leading to boost productivity sale. I believe that this model provides us much
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positive
than
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negative
. This essay will shed light on this situation
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before
give the author’s
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oppinion
.

On the one hand, there are certain
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many
reasons why for
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company
decided using advertising tools to
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symphasise
their
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products
.
First
and foremost, the
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products
value is
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improved
thanks to the advertising. In fact, the
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products
are
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advertisered
in TV, radio, even social media always
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get
a
highly
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recommened
for
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customers
.
Secondly
, it is
extremely
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clear
for
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viwers
when access detail related to
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products
in advertising tools.
Obviously
,
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throughly
advertisement
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so
that a large amount of
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people
can know
clearly
about the
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products
they
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etheir
want or do not want to
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buy
.

Despite the aforementioned benefits, using advertising
also
bring both businesses and
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customer
numerous
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negative
.
Firstly
,
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customers
face to
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buy
low-quality
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product
and loss the faith with
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advertisiment
. The
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products
with high cost
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but
the quality not
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good
,
for example
, marketing
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programme
introduce a perfect
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product
with buyer and take the truth into
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products
of them,
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but
after all
these
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bad
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products
are
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bought
by buyer.
Furthermore
, the
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company
may
be lost
their position in market. It is undeniable that a huge
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customer
are lost
and the
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company
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have to
cope with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
sale.

In
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conclution
, advertising is able to
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help
boost
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products
along with increase the sale of businesses.
However
, I
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recomemmend
that the
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company
should take an account
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before
decide advertisement any their
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products
.
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IELTS essay In the modern life, advertising become more prevalent with businesses. It is true that these model advertising are greatly contribution to bring products brand to potential customer, thus leading to boost productivity sale. I believe that this model provides us much positive than negative. This essay will shed light on this situation before give the author’s oppinion.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
274 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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