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Car ownership regulation and encouraging alternative modes of transport

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Travelling has been a crucial part of people’s lives ever since. Growing population of car owners has been clearly evident which resulted in both positive and negative impact. This essay will argue how alternative modes of transport should be encouraged as well as monitoring car ownership and its use. In other parts of the world, public transport can be quite tricky. People found themselves having a hard time relying on it due to constant delays and its limited capacity which evidently cannot compete with its consumers. In addition to that, standard international guidelines may not be as good as in other countries. This may result in further crimes and people buying illegal cars that may lead to further complications. On the other hand, lack of regulations in car usage and ownership lead to worse and long term problems. Traffic and pollution are only some of the main problems that are caused by the increasing number of cars and its usage. According to a recent study published in India, traffic increased for more than 80 percent in just the last 2 years. Furthermore, an article published by Oxford University suggests that world’s air pollution worsens by 5% each year. Encouraging alternative modes of transport can also improve people’s health. A recent study from Cambridge University suggests that people who are cycling to work as more positive in their well being than those who use car. Walking is also helpful to humans as the body moves, the brain releases endorphins which is responsible for making people feel happy. In conclusion, despite the challenges, I entirely agree that the government should start the regulations for car ownership and also should pave the way to monitor its use to prevent long term issues.
Travelling has been a crucial part of
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people’s
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lives
ever since. Growing population of
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car
owners has been
clearly
evident which resulted in both
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positive
and
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negative
impact. This essay will argue how alternative modes of transport should
be encouraged
as well
as monitoring
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car
ownership and its
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use
.

In other parts of the world, public transport can be quite tricky.
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People
found themselves having a
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hard
time relying on it due to constant delays and its limited capacity which
evidently
cannot compete with its consumers.
In addition
to that, standard international guidelines may not be as
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good
as in other countries. This may result in
further
crimes and
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people
buying illegal
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cars
that may lead to
further
complications.

On the other hand
, lack of regulations in
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car
usage and ownership lead to worse and long term problems. Traffic and pollution are
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only
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some of the
main problems that
are caused
by the increasing number of
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cars
and its usage. According to a recent study published in India, traffic increased for more than 80 percent in
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just
the last 2 years.
Furthermore
, an article published by Oxford University suggests that world’s air pollution worsens by 5% each year.

Encouraging alternative modes of transport can
also
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improve
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people’s
health. A recent study from Cambridge University suggests that
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people
who are cycling to work as more
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positive
in their
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well being
than those who
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use
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car
. Walking is
also
helpful to humans as the body
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moves
, the brain releases endorphins which is responsible for making
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people
feel happy.

In conclusion
, despite the challenges, I
entirely
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agree
that the
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government
should
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start
the regulations for
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car
ownership and
also
should pave the way to monitor its
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use to
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prevent
long term issues.
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IELTS essay Car ownership regulation and encouraging alternative modes of transport

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
289 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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