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In the last century when a human astronaut arrived on the moon, He said “it is a big step for mankind”. But some people say it makes little or no difference to our daily life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the last century when a human astronaut arrived on the moon, He said “it is a big step for mankind”. But some people say it makes little or no difference to our daily life. g2W1
Nowadays, research about another planet is soaring due advancements in technology. In the past centuries, when individual astronaut stepped on the moon, he claimed that, "it is a giant leap for people living on the earth". While a few groups believe that, it makes small amount of difference to our day-to-day life. This esasy will discuss about given claim in detail. There are several reasons why people view that space exploration is not mandatory. Firstly, expenditures of the inspection of space is sky touching such as travelling costs, equipments costs, and so on. For example, it takes billions of dollars to make space shuttles by which scientists reaches to the space and these space shuttles require high amount of special type of fule. Moreover, it also on of the prime factors for damaging the environment as toxic gases release from rockets such as Methene, CFC, etc. In addition, these kind of experiments sometimes led to horrible tragedy. Prime example of it is NASA, couple of years ago NASA's shuttle is going towards the moon with containing 15 astronatus, but, unfortunately, due to the fact of friction-force of air shuttle started burning rapidly and all 15 people were dead at that time. On the other hand, a number of people believe that space exploration is crucial for humans. Due to this modernization era, individuals are developing the variuos kinds of machineries, technologies in order to make human lives more better and easy without taking care of environment. Hence, it polluted environment and it indirectly makes difficult to live on the earth for up coming generations. So that, it is necessary to find an alternative option for one's survive on the another planet and it can only be posibble by space studies. In fact, astologer's findings prevent us from the plenty of big tragedies as they can predict the events before it occurs in the universe. Consequently, space exploration is advantegeous for every living creatures on the earth in numerous ways. In conclusion, personally, I think that, space exploration have both sides optimistic as well as pessimistic, but individuals ought to find alternative for it's negative impacts and astrological study should be continue. Besides, I definetly believe that, exploring Universe is big leap for humans.
Nowadays, research about another planet is soaring due advancements in technology. In the past centuries, when individual astronaut stepped on the moon, he claimed that,
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"
it is a giant leap for
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people
living on the earth
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"
. While a few groups believe that, it
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makes
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small
amount of difference to our day-to-day life. This
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esasy
will discuss about
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claim in detail.

There are several reasons why
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people
view that
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space
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exploration
is not mandatory.
Firstly
, expenditures of the inspection of
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space
is sky touching such as travelling costs, equipments costs, and
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so
on.
For example
, it takes billions of dollars to
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make
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space
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shuttles
by which scientists
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reaches
to the
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space
and these
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space
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shuttles
require high amount of special type of
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fule
.
Moreover
,
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it
also
on of the prime factors for damaging the environment as toxic gases release from rockets such as
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Methene
, CFC, etc.
In addition
,
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these kind
of experiments
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sometimes
led to horrible tragedy. Prime example of it is NASA,
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couple of
years ago NASA's
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shuttle
is going towards the moon with containing 15
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astronatus
,
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but
, unfortunately, due to the fact of friction-force of air
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shuttle
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started
burning
rapidly
and all 15
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people
were dead at that time.

On the other hand
, a number of
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people
believe that
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space
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exploration
is crucial for humans. Due to this modernization era, individuals are developing the
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variuos
kinds of
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machineries
, technologies in order to
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make
human
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lives
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more better
and easy without taking care of environment.
Hence
, it polluted environment and it
indirectly
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makes
difficult to
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live
on the earth for up coming generations.
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So
that, it is necessary to find an alternative option for
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one's
survive on the another planet and it can
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only
be
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posibble
by
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space
studies. In fact,
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astologer
's findings
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prevent
us from the
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plenty
of
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big
tragedies as they can predict the
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events
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before
it occurs in the universe.
Consequently
,
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space
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exploration
is
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advantegeous
for every living creatures on the earth in numerous ways.
In conclusion
,
personally
, I
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think
that,
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space
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exploration
have both sides optimistic
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as well as
pessimistic,
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but
individuals ought to find alternative for it's
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negative
impacts and astrological study should be
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continue
.
Besides
, I
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definetly
believe that, exploring Universe is
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big
leap for humans.
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IELTS essay In the last century when a human astronaut arrived on the moon, He said “it is a big step for mankind”. But some people say it makes little or no difference to our daily life.

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