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In the future shopping malls

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Nowadays you can find a shopping mall in every city. This clearly has benefits and drawbacks. I will consider both sides of argument and give my own view. Many people prefer to shop online rather than go to the supermarkets. However, others would like to purchase from supermarkets and shopping malls. In online shopping provides us a wider variety of items to choose in addition it gives facilities to save precious time. Moreover, this kind of shopping chains also offer online grocery shopping for order necessary things and it is freshly delivered. On the opposite side of online shopping we come across huge supermarkets especially shopping malls. Currently shopping malls play an inseparable role in humans life and it is being appeared every country even every town furthermore shopping malls are developing and famous for its convenient on a daily basis. Spending your time in shopping malls is enjoyable because of it possessed its cinemas, restaurants and bowling alleys. Besides that you can try on brand clothes and ask advice from a shop assistant who is a buff person his goods. In one word shops and entertainment are under one roof. I strongly believe that in the future we face to great shopping malls for not to waste our time.
Nowadays you can find a
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shopping
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in every city. This
clearly
has benefits and drawbacks. I will consider both sides of argument and give my
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own
view.

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people
prefer to shop
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online
rather
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However
, others would like to
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purchase
from supermarkets and
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shopping
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malls
. In
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online
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shopping
provides us a wider variety of items to choose
in addition
it gives facilities to save precious time.
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, this kind of
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shopping
chains
also
offer
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online
grocery
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shopping
for order necessary things and it is
freshly
delivered. On the opposite side of
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online
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shopping
we
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come
across huge supermarkets
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shopping
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malls
.
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Currently
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shopping
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malls
play an inseparable role in humans life and it is
being appeared
every country even every town
furthermore
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shopping
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malls
are developing and
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famous
for its convenient on a daily basis. Spending your time in
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shopping
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malls
is enjoyable
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because
of it possessed its cinemas, restaurants and bowling alleys.
Besides
that you can try on brand clothes and ask advice from a shop assistant who is a buff person his
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goods
.

In one word shops and entertainment are under one roof. I
strongly
believe that in the future we face to great
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shopping
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malls
for not to waste our time.
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IELTS essay In the future shopping malls

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
210 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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