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Gap year in the world and Uzbekistan

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The phrase "gap year" has traditionally meant spending a year abroad on a structured programme while taking a break from study, with this rite of passage typically embraced by college leavers before they start university. In Uzbekistan the "gap year" has not yet developed, but in other foreign countries it is very popular. Gap year has advantages and disadvantages. I think there are many advantages gap year. Because travelling is so much fun to see the world. I am interested in traveling. We need to seize this opportunity without spending our lives just reading. You can travel to many countries in one year.
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traditionally
meant spending a
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year
abroad on a structured
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programme
while taking a break from study, with this rite of passage
typically
embraced by college leavers
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before
they
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start
university. In Uzbekistan the
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gap year
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but
in other foreign countries it is
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very
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Gap
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year
has advantages and disadvantages. I
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think
there are
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many
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advantages
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travelling is
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so
much fun to
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see
the world. I
am interested
in traveling. We need to seize this opportunity without spending our
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lives
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just
reading. You can travel to
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many
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IELTS essay Gap year in the world and Uzbekistan

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
103 words
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