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Gap year in the world and Uzbekistan

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The phrase "gap year" has traditionally meant spending a year abroad on a structured programme while taking a break from study, with this rite of passage typically embraced by college leavers before they start university. In Uzbekistan the "gap year" has not yet developed, but in other foreign countries it is very popular. Gap year has advantages and disadvantages. I think there are many advantages gap year. Because travelling is so much fun to see the world. I am interested in traveling. We need to seize this opportunity without spending our lives just reading. You can travel to many countries in one year.
The phrase
"
gap year
"
has
traditionally
meant spending a
year
abroad on a structured
programme
while taking a break from study, with this rite of passage
typically
embraced by college leavers
before
they
start
university. In Uzbekistan the
"
gap year
"
has not
yet
developed,
but
in other foreign countries it is
very
popular.
Gap
year
has advantages and disadvantages. I
think
there are
many
advantages
gap
year
.
Because
travelling is
so
much fun to
see
the world. I
am interested
in traveling. We need to seize this opportunity without spending our
lives
just
reading. You can travel to
many
countries in one
year
.
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IELTS essay Gap year in the world and Uzbekistan

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
103 words
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