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Gap year in the world and Uzbekistan

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The phrase "gap year" has traditionally meant spending a year abroad on a structured programme while taking a break from study, with this rite of passage typically embraced by college leavers before they start university. In Uzbekistan the "gap year" has not yet developed, but in other foreign countries it is very popular. Gap year has advantages and disadvantages. I think there are many advantages gap year. Because travelling is so much fun to see the world. I am interested in traveling. We need to seize this opportunity without spending our lives just reading. You can travel to many countries in one year.

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