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In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to to read everything the want online without paying.

In the decade years it has been considered changes in all system even influenced to the media. In the coming individuals probably utilize gadgets in order to read news and stop to purchase magazines. I partly agree with this this view due to the special magazines has benifit Firstly the reason of choosing printed magazines is that it is suitable for all ages exactly it does make problem with people who are elderly, In addition the sheets are convenient to carry everywhere
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been considered
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changes
in all system even influenced to the media. In the coming individuals
probably
utilize gadgets in order to read news and
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stop
to
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purchase
magazines. I partly
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agree
with
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this this
view due to the special magazines has
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benifit


Firstly
the reason of choosing printed magazines is that it is suitable for all ages exactly it does
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make
problem with
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people
who are elderly,
In addition
the sheets are convenient to carry
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everywhere

IELTS essay In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to to read everything the want online without paying.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
81 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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