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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. What extent g9ya
It has been argued that in the next future newspapers will no longer be bought since all kinds of information will be free-accessible online. This essay disagrees with this thesis. Firstly, not all sources of information online are reliable. Secondly, not everybody is used to seeking news online, therefore newspapers are for them still the major reference. First off, during the last decade, the advent of the Internet has been followed by an ever-increasing flow of fake news. Instances of websites that constantly publish wrong information abound online, thus discouraging people from being attracted by free-online vehicles of information. For this reason, most people still tend to buy physical newspapers instead of reading free-online websites. This condition has been proved by a recent investigation. It has shown that newspapers’ and magazines’ sales have only decreased by 2 percent throughout a 10-year period. This redoubtably suggests that printed information is still popular. On the other hand, although more people than before having access to online information, there’s still a remarkable part of the population that is recalcitrant about embracing the innovation. Indeed, mostly seniors or mid-aged people prefer buying paper journals rather than reading online information either because they don’t have an Internet connection or because, even though they are connected, those aren’t able to search online for what they need. As a matter of fact, almost three-quarters of printed-news consumers are older than the average online users. To conclude, despite a downtrend in the newspapers’ distribution, evidence suggests that this way of diffusing information is not set to retire yet both because people still trust them and also because not everyone has direct access to online resources.
It has
been argued
that in the
next
future
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newspapers
will no longer be
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bought
since all kinds of
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information
will be free-accessible
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online
. This essay disagrees with this thesis.
Firstly
, not all sources of
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information
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online
are reliable.
Secondly
, not everybody is
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used
to seeking news
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online
,
therefore
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newspapers
are for them
still
the major reference.

First
off, during the last decade, the advent of the Internet has
been followed
by an ever-increasing flow of fake news. Instances of websites that
constantly
publish
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wrong
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information
abound
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online
,
thus
discouraging
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people
from
being attracted
by free-online vehicles of
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information
.
For this reason
, most
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people
still
tend to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
physical
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newspapers
instead
of reading free-online websites. This condition has
been proved
by a recent investigation. It has shown that
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newspapers’
and magazines’ sales have
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only
decreased by 2 percent throughout a 10-year period. This
redoubtably
suggests that printed
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information
is
still
popular.

On the other hand
, although more
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people
than
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before
having access to
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online
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information
, there’s
still
a remarkable part of the population
that is
recalcitrant about embracing the innovation.
Indeed
,
mostly
seniors or mid-aged
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people
prefer buying paper journals
rather
than reading
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online
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information
either
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because
they don’t have an Internet connection or
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because
,
even though
they
are connected
, those aren’t able to search
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online
for what they need. As a matter of fact, almost three-quarters of printed-news consumers are older than the average
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online
users.

To conclude
, despite a downtrend in the
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newspapers’
distribution, evidence suggests that this way of diffusing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
is not set to retire
yet
both
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
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people
still
trust them and
also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
not everyone has direct access to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
resources.
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IELTS essay In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. What extent

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
277 words
6.5
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