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This pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made

This pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made rm86

The picture depicts the process by which tomato ketchup is produced and packed in order to be sold to customers. Overall, it can be seen that the process making of tomato ketchup is simple but systematic. At a cusrory glance, it is clear that the process begins with the the picking the tomatoes by farmers to put it into the basket. thereafter, a person segregate good quality tomatoes and sent to the factory for removal process where impurities like stalk, seeds and skins are removed out. Moving further, the sorted tomatoes are collected in containers where they are crushed to become liquid. At this point, sugar, salt, vinegar are addedProbing further, in the following step, the liquid is boiled and left undisturbed for 2 hours to settle down. In addition to this, the liquid is poured into the labelled tomato ketchup bottles. Further, the labelled ketchup bottles are sent for quality check where the good quality bottles are packed and delivered to the supermarket for sale. Finally, the customer buys and enjoys with hamburger and fries

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