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Some people believe that the best way to travel within a city is by car. Others believe it is best to travel by bicycle. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Some people believe that the best way to travel within a city is by car. Others believe it is best to travel by bicycle. b5Y3
Means of transport have always been a topic of discuss among the public world-wide. Few sections of the society think that car is the most convenient means of transportation for travelling in the urban areas, however; some others opine that bicycle is the perfect form of travel. I completely agree with the former opinion. This essay will discuss, why car is considered as the best way to travel across the cities and what are the inconveniences caused by riding cycles in the city traffic. Firstly, four wheelers are said to be finest means of transport due to the comfort in travelling. This is because, the people driving cars in the urban society feel more secured inside the car, as these vehicles are introduced to the market after undergoing the safety testing as well the precautions. Moreover, they find it convenient with the number of seating arrangements and also it could control the traffic jams along with the side effects of pollutions. For example, if a company provide their employees cab facility, this will reduce the amount of pollution in the towns as well as reduce the traffic congestions. However, on the other hand, some feel that city travelling the bicycles can be useful to protect the environment. They believe so because, this means of travel could reduce the growing demands of oils and environmental pollutions to a greater extend. As a result, they could conserve the environment for the future generations. For instance, a city called Braxton in U. K have asked their citizens to use bicycle in the weekends instead of the other motor vehicles. With this they were able to reduce the air and noise pollution in that area. Therefore, they think bicycle is best in city traffics. In conclusion, car is the most possible and convenient way of transport in the city life rather than the ride on the bicycle. In my perspective, despite many drawbacks travelling by car are effective and efficient in providing safety over the bicycles.
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think
that
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car
is the most convenient
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means
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travelling
in the urban areas,
however
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some
others opine that
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bicycle
is the perfect form of travel. I completely
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agree
with the former opinion. This essay will discuss, why
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car
is considered
as the best way to travel across the
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cities
and what are the inconveniences caused by riding cycles in the city traffic.

Firstly
, four
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are said
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means
of transport due to the comfort in
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. This is
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because
, the
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people
driving
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cars
in the urban society feel more secured inside the
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car
, as these vehicles
are introduced
to the market after undergoing the safety testing
as well
the precautions.
Moreover
, they find it convenient with the number of seating arrangements and
also
it could control the traffic jams along with the side effects of
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pollutions
.
For example
, if a
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company
provide their employees cab facility, this will
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reduce
the amount of
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pollution
in the towns
as well
as
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reduce
the traffic congestions.

However
,
on the other hand
,
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some
feel that city
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travelling
the
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bicycles
can be useful to protect the environment. They believe
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so
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, this
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means
of travel could
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reduce
the growing demands of oils and environmental
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pollutions
to a greater
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.
As a result
, they could conserve the environment for the future generations.
For instance
, a city called Braxton in U. K have asked their citizens to
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use
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bicycle
in the weekends
instead
of the other motor vehicles. With this they were able to
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reduce
the air and noise
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pollution
in that area.
Therefore
, they
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think
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bicycle
is best in city traffics.

In conclusion
,
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car
is the most possible and convenient way of transport in the city life
rather
than the ride on the
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bicycle
. In my perspective, despite
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many
drawbacks
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travelling
by
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car
are effective and efficient in providing safety over the
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bicycles
.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that the best way to travel within a city is by car. Others believe it is best to travel by bicycle.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
332 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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