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"Prevention is better than cure”. Researching and treating diseases is too costly. So it would be better to invest in prevention measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

"Prevention is better than cure”. Researching and treating diseases is too costly. So it would be better to invest in prevention measures. LKQG
There is a saying- “Prevention is better than cure”. People say it is very costly to do research and treat illness, instead, investing in taking preventive measures is a better option. This essay disagrees with the statement as it is practically impossible to make every single person aware of the prevention procedure and prevention of a disease is not always the permanent solution. First of all, prevention measures can only be effective if all the people take necessary action to make sure the disease does not spread. While it seems feasible, it is impractical to believe every individual would take the matter with same seriousness. One mistake from any one person can breach the prevention protocols and it might be enough to spread any infectious disease. For instance, at the time of Covid-19 pandemic, it was found that one in every three persons did not follow the standard safety protocols set by the Government in order to prevent the spread of the virus. As a result, the pandemic is still not over. Also, a permanent solution is necessary in order to do away with any diseases. Preventive measures can only delay the outbreak of any sickness which can always come back in the future. Putting money in finding the cure of a disease and treating it can only get rid of the illness for good. It can also make sure that even if the malady comes back in the future, people would still be unharmed as they would have the proper treatment for it. For example, Deadly diseases like Smallpox are believed to be eradicated as children are vaccinated after being born. To conclude, doing research on illnesses and treating it can be costly, yet I think it is the better option than investing in preventive measures instead as educating everyone about the prevention procedures successfully is unlikely to be a reality and a cure can only be a permanent solution to any diseases.
There is a saying-
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“Prevention
is better than cure”.
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People
say it is
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very
costly to do research and treat illness,
instead
, investing in taking preventive
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measures
is a better option. This essay disagrees with the statement as it is
practically
impossible to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
every single person aware of the
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prevention
procedure and
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prevention
of a
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disease
is not always the permanent solution.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
,
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prevention
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measures
can
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only
be effective if all the
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people
take necessary action to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure the
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disease
does not spread. While it seems feasible, it is impractical to believe every individual would take the matter with same seriousness. One mistake from any one person can breach the
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prevention
protocols and it might be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
to spread any infectious
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disease
.
For instance
, at the time of Covid-19 pandemic, it
was found
that one in every three persons did not follow the standard safety protocols set by the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Government
in order to
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prevent
the spread of the virus.
As a result
, the pandemic is
still
not over.

Also
, a permanent solution is necessary in order to do away with any
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diseases
. Preventive
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measures
can
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only
delay the outbreak of any sickness which can always
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come
back in the future. Putting money in finding the cure of a
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disease
and treating it can
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only
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get
rid of the illness for
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good
. It can
also
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make
sure that even if the malady
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comes
back in the future,
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people
would
still
be unharmed
as they would have the proper treatment for it.
For example
, Deadly
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diseases
like Smallpox
are believed
to
be eradicated
as children
are vaccinated
after
being born
.

To conclude
, doing research on illnesses and treating it can be costly,
yet
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
it is the better option than investing in preventive
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
measures
instead
as educating everyone about the
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prevention
procedures
successfully
is unlikely to be a reality and a cure can
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
only
be a permanent solution to any
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
diseases
.
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IELTS essay "Prevention is better than cure”. Researching and treating diseases is too costly. So it would be better to invest in prevention measures.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
324 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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