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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. with this statement. VMbm
Due to the development in technology nowadays, there are various things that are changed in order to serve people convenient. Presses and books are the example that will be transferred to the online platform in the nearly future from now. In my opinion, I partly agree of this statement. This essay will depicts on how benefits and drawbacks causing on the online reading news and E-book. First of all, online platform of reading articles might decrease the amount of wasted products such as papers. People, right now, cut down a lot of trees for produce papers in order to manufacture the books and dairy newspapers selling to the customers. However, there is a ton of books were trashed after they finish reading, including the presses, therefore, uploading online will advantage on both producers and us as clients. Since it will be lower a number of rubbishes coming from those papers and destroying the environment, consequently, it leads to the decreasing in cost of manufacture and freely read by citizens. Nevertheless, all newspapers and books will not be able to consume on the Internet via their electric devices. Although online reading shows a lot of aspects that this will serve people more comfortable, there still are a lot of people do not have the smartphones or computers. Back to a decade ago since the technology was not improved yet, thus, books and newspapers are only two ways to get through the news and gain knowledges. In the present day, there are some group of people still cannot approach any of these electronic devices and technology. This is obvious that the traditional form of reading still being in use. To sum up, both online and printed articles will be used in order to let all of people access the information depending on their preferring
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changed
in order to serve
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people
convenient. Presses and
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books
are the example that will
be transferred
to the
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online
platform in the
nearly
future from
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now
. In my opinion, I partly
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agree
of this statement. This essay will
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depicts
on how benefits and drawbacks causing on the
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online
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reading
news and E-book.

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First of all
,
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online
platform of
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reading
articles might decrease the amount of wasted products such as papers.
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People
, right
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now
,
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cut
down
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a lot of
trees for produce papers in order to manufacture the
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books
and dairy newspapers selling to the customers.
However
, there is a ton of
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books
were trashed
after they finish
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reading
, including the presses,
therefore
, uploading
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online
will advantage on both producers and us as clients. Since it will be
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lower
a number of rubbishes coming from those papers and destroying the environment,
consequently
, it leads to the decreasing in cost of manufacture and
freely
read by citizens.

Nevertheless
, all newspapers and
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books
will not be able to consume on the Internet via their electric devices. Although
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online
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reading
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shows
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a lot of
aspects that this will serve
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people
more comfortable, there
still
are
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a lot of
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people
do not have the smartphones or computers. Back to a decade ago since the technology was not
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improved
yet
,
thus
,
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books
and newspapers are
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only
two ways to
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get
through the news and gain
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knowledges
. In the present day, there are
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some
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group
of
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people
still
cannot approach any of these electronic devices and technology. This is obvious that the traditional form of
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reading
still
being in
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use
.

To sum up, both
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online
and printed articles will be
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used
in order to
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let
all of
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people
access the information depending on their preferring
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IELTS essay In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. with this statement.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
301 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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