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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Owing to the availability of widespread internet, some think that people will not read printed newspapers or books, rather they will use the online system to read whatever they want and definitely not by purchasing it. I do not agree with the statement that there will be no future buying of newspapers or books. Although the current generation tends more to read any article or news on the internet, there are still some people left who have not yet succumbed to the online world. These people still buy newspapers and will definitely not give up this habit in the future. One obvious reason for this is, they have been watching since their childhoods that newspapers are bought in their houses by their parents. Moreover, they have maintained this habit throughout their lives. With regards to buying books, there are a number of populations who do not buy any kind of books, be it educational or storybooks since these are available on the internet for free of cost. However, there are also a majority group of people who lean towards buying books, mostly educational. This is because they are not only comfortable in reading printed books but also they highlight any important information while reading. For example, a student who is going through a chapter of a coursebook, wants to underline the vital points in order to find them easily later on. This is a subjective mindset and will never go away. To conclude, notwithstanding the facilities of obtaining newspapers or books online, there will always be a group of population who will not let go of their habits in the future and stick to reading anything in the printed version.
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or
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books
,
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they will
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use
the online system to read whatever they want and definitely not by purchasing it. I do not
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agree
with the statement that there will be no future buying of
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newspapers
or books.

Although the
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current
generation tends more to read any article or news on the internet, there are
still
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some
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people
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left
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who
have not
yet
succumbed to the online world. These
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people
still
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buy
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newspapers
and will definitely not give up this habit in the future. One obvious reason for this is, they have been watching since their childhoods that
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newspapers
are
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bought
in their
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houses
by their parents.
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, they have maintained this habit throughout their
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lives
.

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buying
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books
, there are a number of populations
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who
do not
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buy
any kind of
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books
, be it educational or storybooks since these are available on the internet for free of cost.
However
, there are
also
a majority group of
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people
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who
lean towards buying
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books
,
mostly
educational. This is
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because
they are not
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only
comfortable in reading printed
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books
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but
also
they highlight any
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important
information while reading.
For example
, a student
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who
is going through a chapter of a coursebook, wants to underline the vital points in order to find them
easily
later on. This is a subjective mindset and will never go away.

To conclude
, notwithstanding the facilities of obtaining
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newspapers
or
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books
online, there will always be a group of population
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who
will not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
go of their habits in the future and stick to reading anything in the printed version.
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IELTS essay In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying it.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
280 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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