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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. with this statement? AqPX
It is undeniable that many texts such as books, newspapers and magazines have become commonly available online at no cost. However, this does not necessarily mean that people will be able to read everything via the internet without paying. In this essay, I will explain why I think that not all online texts will be free in the future and that people will still want to buy printed texts regardless. Firstly, if everything becomes pirated online and thus anyone becomes able to access it free of charge, a number of adverse effects will ensue. To illustrate, the continuing copyright infringement can lead the publishing industry to collapse, and, as a result, thousands of people would lose their jobs, struggling to earn a living. Some might argue that it is our loss to pay for books when we can get them for free. However, it is an indubitable fact that posting free content without consent is an illegal crime and that it must not be generalised in societies. Secondly, traditional books or magazines have tactile sensation, which sharply contrast with e-books that are only available on electronic devices. This is one of the primary reasons why certain individuals appreciate printed books since they can feel their progress through a book as the upcoming pages get fewer and fewer. In addition, this often contributes to better comprehension and information absorption quite unlike the digital books, which can permit several distractions such as other applications installed on the device. In conclusion, I strongly disagree that people will no longer purchase printed books in the future. Although it is true that digital versions of books or magazines allow us to access books easily, I strongly believe that we all have to pay for things and not everything should be free in this world. In conclusion, it seems to me that the strongest argument is in favor of adults having the joyous times in their lives. Despite adolescence providing a host of beneficial opportunities that bring happiness and other positive feelings, I strongly believe that true bliss in one’s life really occurs in adulthood.
It is undeniable that
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many
texts such as
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books
, newspapers and magazines have become
commonly
available online at no cost.
However
, this does not
necessarily
mean that
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people
will be able to read everything via the internet without paying. In this essay, I will
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explain
why I
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think
that not all online texts will be
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free
in the future and that
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people
will
still
want to
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buy
printed texts regardless.

Firstly
, if everything becomes pirated online and
thus
anyone becomes able to access it
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free
of charge, a number of adverse effects will ensue. To illustrate, the continuing copyright infringement can lead the publishing industry to collapse, and,
as a result
, thousands of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
would lose their jobs, struggling to earn a living.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
might argue that it is our loss to pay for
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books
when we can
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get
them for
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free
.
However
, it is an indubitable fact that posting
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
free
content without consent is an illegal crime and that it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
not be
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generalised
in societies.

Secondly
, traditional
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books
or magazines have tactile sensation, which
sharply
contrast with e-books that are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
available on electronic devices. This is one of the primary reasons why certain individuals appreciate printed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
since they can feel their progress through a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
as the upcoming pages
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
fewer and fewer.
In addition
, this
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
often
contributes to better comprehension and information absorption quite unlike the digital
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
, which can permit several distractions such as other applications installed on the device.

In conclusion
, I
strongly
disagree that
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people
will no longer
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
printed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
in the future. Although it is true that digital versions of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
or magazines
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
us to access
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books
easily
, I
strongly
believe that we all
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
pay for things and not everything should be
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
free
in this world.

In conclusion
, it seems to me that the strongest argument is in favor of adults having the joyous times in their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
. Despite adolescence providing a host of beneficial opportunities that bring happiness and other
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
feelings, I
strongly
believe that true bliss in one’s life
really
occurs in adulthood.
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IELTS essay In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. with this statement?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
349 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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