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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. with this statement? 71m3
It has been expected that in near future everyone would be able to read e-books and newspapers at no cost rather than buying printed forms. I totally agree that printed media will be obsolete very soon due to easy accessibility and availability of diversified material on internet. One of the positive aspects of online reading is its easy approach. Books can be accessed and read anytime, such as while travelling. It will not only save time but also make it functional and enjoyable. Furthermore, hassle of carrying big books can be avoided by reading online books which can cause an extra burden on someone. Sometimes circumstances necessitate to read and get an answer very quick that is only possible when books are handy. This can only be achieved through internet which is now a days available almost everywhere. Another advantage is availability of a variety of books on internet. When a huge collection of books can be approached by just one click without spending any money, no one will prefer to purchase only a single item. For instance, while looking for an article on internet, material from numerous writers pops up for no cost. However, to buy all those in printer form, a big chunk of money to be paid. Though variety of books can make selection difficult, it would lead to choose best option. Although some people argue about lack of aesthetic appeal of online books and collectivity of printed material, easy approach and diversity of reading books and newspapers will outdate printed media in future.
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due to easy accessibility and availability of diversified material on internet.

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aspects of online reading is its easy approach.
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on internet. When a huge collection of
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IELTS essay In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. with this statement?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
257 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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