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In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books as they will be available online for free.

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Papers were used for different purposes from books to newspapers. The essay says there will be no usage of these papers for newspapers and books. I agree with this statement there was a decline in the sales of the paper. Many applications provide thousands of books for free and others provide with a subscription fee. If we buy a book then it will be difficult for a person to carry that book with him whereas if he read online he doesn't need to carry those books instead we can read any book on our phone itself. Books were costly but if we take a subscription with the cost of one book we can read multiple books. In many houses books occupies a large chunk of space in their living room this problem can be removed if we study online. In olden days people need to wait for the news paper to read about the news but now all major news paper companies were uploading the news instantly on their websites. So, people can learn about news quickly so most of them were preferring websites. This helps both news paper company and readers as printing news paper and transporting them to every house requires huge amounts in comparison with uploading news in an online portal. In conclusion, the sales of printed news paper and books will go down drastically as studying online provides more value than physical books. I encourage others to read online as it reduces the paper requirements which decreases the cutting down of trees and this helps our environment.
Papers were
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used
for
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different
purposes from
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books
to newspapers. The essay says there will be no usage of these papers for newspapers and
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books
. I
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agree
with this statement there was a decline in the sales of the paper.

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Many
applications provide thousands of
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books
for free
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and others
provide with a subscription fee. If we
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buy
a
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book
then it will be difficult for a person to carry that
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book
with him whereas if he
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read
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online
he doesn't need to carry those
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books
instead
we can
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read
any
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book
on our phone itself.
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Books
were costly
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but
if we take a subscription with the cost of one
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book
we can
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read
multiple
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books
. In
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many
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houses
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books
occupies a large chunk of space in their living room this problem can
be removed
if we study
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online
. In olden days
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people
need to wait for the
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news paper
to
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read
about the
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news
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but
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now
all major
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news paper
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companies
were uploading the
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news
instantly
on their websites.
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So
,
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people
can learn about
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news
quickly
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so
most of them
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were preferring
websites. This
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helps
both
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news paper
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company
and readers as printing
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news paper
and transporting them to every
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house
requires huge amounts
in comparison
with uploading
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news
in an
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online
portal.

In conclusion
, the sales of printed
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news paper
and
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books
will go down
drastically
as studying
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online
provides more value than physical
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books
. I encourage others to
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read
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online
as it
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reduces
the paper requirements which decreases the cutting down of trees and this
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helps
our environment.
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IELTS essay In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books as they will be available online for free.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
261 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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