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In the future,nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without payment. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without payment. with this statement? pyO9
Development of technology such as internet has enable people to read newspaper convinently. Some individual advocate that the people no longer purchase daily newspaper or books this is due to online platform where they can access free of cost. I completely agree with this statement and believe traditional newspaper will be completely replaced by online newspaper in future. To embark upon, online platform for reading news or books is most popular in recent times, people these days can access different types of current affairs and books easily without paying money. With the click of one button all the information will be available in their palm. Many student these days study online beacause all the books that they require is available on internet and they can access from everywhere. Furthermore, it has helped lot of researcher to research and read different article related to their field of research. For instance, Google which is considered as one of the biggest technological gaint in the world provides enormous amount of information free of cost with just typing keyword in the search bar. On the other hand, there are various online news websit such onlinekhabar. com, himalayantimes. com, gorkhapatra. com. These news website provide news update within one second. In early days people used to go to stationery to read newspaper and book. Moreover, individual used to spend loads of time in library to read books, which was time consuming and they had to pay the charge for library to become the member to access book, but these days masses no longer visit book stationery or library. In addition, it has also become more popular among elderly people who are unable to go in market in search of news, they can easily read news and books sitting in home with the click of button in mobile or computer. In conclusion, easy accessibility and day to day update about national and international news make online more popular in recent times, but at the same time disadvantage cannot be overlooked
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individual advocate that the
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people
no longer
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purchase
daily
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newspaper
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books
this is due to
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platform where they can
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access
free of cost. I completely
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agree
with this statement and believe traditional
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newspaper
will be completely replaced by
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online
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newspaper
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in future
.

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online
platform for reading
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news
or
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books
is most popular in recent
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times
,
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people
these days can
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access
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different
types of
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current
affairs and
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books
easily
without paying money. With the click of one button all the information will be available in their palm.
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Many
student these days study
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online
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beacause
all the
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books
that they require is available on
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internet and
they can
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access
from everywhere.
Furthermore
, it has
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helped
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lot of
researcher to research and
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read
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different
article related to their field of research.
For instance
, Google which
is considered
as one of the biggest technological
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gaint
in the world provides enormous amount of information free of cost with
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just
typing keyword in the search bar.

On the other hand
, there are various
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online
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news
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websit
such
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onlinekhabar
.
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com
,
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himalayantimes
.
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com
,
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gorkhapatra
.
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com
. These
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website provide
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news
update within one second. In early days
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people
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used
to go to stationery to
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newspaper
and
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book
.
Moreover
, individual
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used
to spend loads of
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in library to
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read
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books
, which was
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time consuming
and they had to pay the charge for library to become the member to
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access
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book
,
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these days masses no longer visit
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stationery or library.
In addition
, it has
also
become more popular among elderly
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people
who are unable to go in market in search of
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news
, they can
easily
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read
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news
and
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books
sitting in home with the click of button in mobile or computer.

In conclusion
, easy accessibility and day to day update about national and international
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news
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make
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online
more popular in recent
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times
,
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at the same
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time
disadvantage cannot
be overlooked
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IELTS essay In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without payment. with this statement?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
333 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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