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In the future no one will buy printed newspapers or

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In the future no one will purchase printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. Although there are a little bit justifications, I agree with given information to a large degree without doubt. It is apparently known that nowadays society is not buying and reading newspapers or books than they used to be in the past. The particular reason for the circumstance is commonly using techno gadgets such as smartphones, laptops etc. For instance, young children and teenagers usually play games and get exciting content from the NET via smartphones to waste their time amazingly; as they get older, they begin to associate that they could not even imagine their life without these gadgets. In addition they do not even think about reading books to find relevant information in their subjects, they simply open Google and do their homework instantly instead of finding information from books or newspapers. Another apparent point to highlight is social media apps, such as Telegram, YouTube, Instagram, Whatsapp, Twitter, Facebook etc. They spend their whole time at these platforms to read news or getting necessary information for the exact purpose, so why they need to buy old printed newspapers or read dust visited books? This actively demonstrates that printed newspapers and books are going to be disappear in the upcoming 50 years. To sum up everything has been stated so far society of our time prefer to get relevant information and read news from social media apps instead of wasting their time by purchasing newspapers or books. Therefore, it is obvious to everyone that nothing is permanent in our life
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everything they want online without paying. Although there are a
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to a large degree without doubt.

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known that nowadays society is not buying and reading
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or
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than they
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used
to be in the past. The particular reason for the circumstance is
commonly
using techno gadgets such as smartphones, laptops etc.
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, young children and
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teenagers
usually
play games and
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get
exciting content from the NET via smartphones to waste their
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time
amazingly
; as they
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older, they
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to associate that they could not even imagine their life without these gadgets. In
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do not even
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about reading
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to find relevant
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in their subjects, they
simply
open Google and do their homework
instantly
instead
of finding
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information
from
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books
or newspapers.

Another apparent point to highlight is social media apps, such as Telegram, YouTube, Instagram,
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, Twitter, Facebook etc. They spend their whole
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at these platforms to
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news or getting necessary
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for the exact purpose,
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why they need to
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dust visited
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? This
actively
demonstrates that printed
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newspapers
and
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books
are going to be
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disappear
in the upcoming 50 years.

To sum up everything has
been stated
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so
far society of our
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prefer to
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relevant
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information
and
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read
news from social media apps
instead
of wasting their
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time
by purchasing
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newspapers
or
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.
Therefore
, it is obvious to everyone that nothing is permanent in our life
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IELTS essay In the future no one will buy printed newspapers or

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
273 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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