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In the future books will exist only on computers. Do you agree?

In the future books will exist only on computers. Do you agree? 15ogq
It is argued that only digital books will be available in the future. This essay completely agrees with this statement because it is much cheaper to read a book on the computer and it is convenient as well. Reading books on the computer cost much less as compared to buy a physical book. This is to say that whenever we search for a book on a website such as Amazon. com, Ebay. com, we find a digital book is much cheaper than a hardcopy of the same book. In addition to that, there are many websites from where you can get a digital version of the book for free. For example, there is a website called Pdfdrive. com where millions of digital books are available for free, you do not even have to signup on that website for downloading a book. The second main reason is that it is far easy to read on the computer rather than a hardcopy. This is because while reading a book in hardcopy you come across a word you do not know the meaning of so you have to open a dictionary in order to understand the word and the entire sentence and this sometimes makes the reader irritated, but on the digital book, you just click on the word you do not understand and you get the meaning of the word and continue with your reading with the same flow. For instance, there are many applications available in which you can download a dictionary and get the meaning of the word you do not understand just by clicking on the word. However, some people find it very difficult to read on-screen screen because it is relatively difficult to focus on the screen than the physical version of the book. In conclusion, it is believed that all books will become digitalized and hardcopy of books will no longer available in the future, this essay agrees with this statement because it is much cheaper and easy to read books on the computer.
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on the computer and it is convenient
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on the computer cost
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compared to
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buy
a physical
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book
. This is to say that whenever we search for a
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book
on a
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website
such as Amazon.
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com
,
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Ebay
.
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com
, we find a digital
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is
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much
cheaper than a
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hardcopy
of the same
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book
.
In addition
to that, there are
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many
websites from where you can
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get
a digital version of the
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book
for free.
For example
, there is a
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website
called
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Pdfdrive
.
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com
where millions of digital
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books
are
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available
for free, you do not even
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have to
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signup
on that
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website
for downloading a book.

The second main reason is that it is far easy to
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read
on the computer
rather
than a
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hardcopy
. This is
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because
while reading a
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book
in
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hardcopy
you
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come
across a
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word
you do not know the meaning of
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so
you
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have to
open a dictionary in order to understand the
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word
and the entire sentence and this
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sometimes
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makes
the reader irritated,
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but
on the digital
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book
, you
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just
click on the
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word
you do not understand and you
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get
the meaning of the
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word
and continue with your reading with the same flow.
For instance
, there are
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many
applications
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available
in which you can download a dictionary and
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get
the meaning of the
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word
you do not understand
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just
by clicking on the
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word
.
However
,
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people
find it
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very
difficult to
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read
on-screen screen
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because
it is
relatively
difficult to focus on the screen than the physical version of the book.

In conclusion
, it
is believed
that all
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books
will become digitalized and
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hardcopy
of
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books
will no longer
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available
in the future, this essay
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agrees
with this statement
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because
it is
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much
cheaper and easy to
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read
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
on the computer.
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IELTS essay In the future books will exist only on computers. Do you agree?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
337 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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