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In the futire, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because thay will be able to read everything thay want online without paying. What to extend do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that people will be more interested on virtual newspapers or reading materials as it will free of cost instead of paper based materials in the upcoming days. This essay has balanced opinion with the statement. This essay will firstly discuss about some usefulness of online materials and then talk about why printed newspaper or books will always have demand. Virtual newspaper is more convenient than paper based newspaper. In future, people will have smart phones and internet connection, so they can be easily read things at any time. Moreover, choosing materials from their preferred zone, will also efficient feature of online materials. In addition to, plethora of virtual applications will be available on mobile phone those will send notification to user. As a result, people can be updated. For instance, 'Prothom Alo' online news portal application give notification to read, and in future, they will launch mobile application. Few people might be unable to use smart devices. Most of the rural areas have not availability of Internet connection. If people, who are live in the undeveloped areas, want to use internet, they will need to buy data with high payment. However, Senior citizens, who are live not only rural areas but also urban areas, are comfortable with paper based reading materials. Hence, a statistics says that 60 percent senior citizens like to read paper based things. To recapitulate, though online learning materials are free and more convenient, some people will prefer to read paper based materials in future.
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that
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people
will be more interested on virtual
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newspapers
or reading
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materials
as it will free of cost
instead
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materials
in the upcoming days. This essay has balanced opinion with the statement. This essay will
firstly
discuss about
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some
usefulness of
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online
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materials
and then talk about why printed
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newspaper
or books will always have demand.

Virtual
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newspaper
is more convenient than paper based
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newspaper
.
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In future
,
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people
will have
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smart phones
and internet connection,
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so
they can be
easily
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read
things at any time.
Moreover
, choosing
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materials
from their preferred zone, will
also
efficient feature of
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online
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materials
.
In addition
to, plethora of virtual applications will be available on mobile phone those will
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send
notification to user.
As a result
,
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people
can
be updated
.
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, '
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Prothom
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online
news portal application give notification to
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read
, and
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in future
, they will launch mobile application.

Few
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people
might be unable to
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use
smart devices. Most of the rural
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areas
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people
, who are
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live
in the undeveloped
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, want to
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use
internet, they will need to
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, Senior citizens, who are
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live
not
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only
rural
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areas
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but
also
urban
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areas
, are comfortable with paper based reading
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materials
.
Hence
, a statistics says that 60 percent senior citizens like to
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read
paper based things.

To recapitulate, though
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online
learning
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materials
are free and more convenient,
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some
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people
will prefer to
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read
paper based
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materials
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in future
.
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IELTS essay In the futire, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because thay will be able to read everything thay want online without paying. What to extend

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
251 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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