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Currently, most companies are accustomed to selling their products through electronically connected networks with the coming of the internet.

Currently, most companies are accustomed to selling their products through electronically connected networks with the coming of the internet. The consequence of which is the number of people who shop on the internet is growing. There are several of causes happen from this. However, certain measures could be taken to mitigate them. Through shopping online the number issues arises. The main one is frauds and duplicates. For example, these days, there are constant news stories about customers are being lain. This is due to of that they may duplicate merchandises for they don't see them with their own eyes unless they are delivered. What's more, a sedentary lifestyle is second issue. Some customers prefer to door delivered services rather than going shops themselves, which might create health problems. Since, people do more movements when they shop on their own. If they choose inactivity, they could face few diseases. It is important that solutions should be taken to combat these issues. First of all, implementing available laws for frauding would be remedy. Because, customers often feel cheated as buy fake brand's products. Or sometimes goods may be unworthy for their expenditure on low quality ones which they bought. Therefore, if authorities legislate against frauds, then these fake companies would be stopped. Furthermore, educating populace about the hazards of the technology and how become healthy. Provided that people visit markets in person, they could buy goods as they want, and also they could be active. In conclusion, as a result of increasing the number of customers who shop online, some problems pose such as frauding and health issues. But in order to tackle them braking in laws for fake merchandises and teaching people the advantages of going shop in person would be suggested.
Currently
, most
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companies
are accustomed
to selling their products through
electronically
connected networks with the coming of the internet. The consequence of which is the number of
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people
who
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shop
on the internet is growing. There are several of causes happen from this.
However
, certain measures could
be taken
to mitigate them.

Through shopping online the number
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issues
arises. The main one is frauds and duplicates.
For example
, these days, there are constant news stories about
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customers
are
being lain
. This is due to of that they may duplicate merchandises for they don't
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see
them with their
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own
eyes unless they
are delivered
. What's more, a sedentary lifestyle is second
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issue
.
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Some
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customers
prefer to door delivered services
rather
than going
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shops
themselves, which might create health problems. Since,
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people
do more movements when they
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shop
on their
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own
. If they choose inactivity, they could face few diseases.

It is
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important
that solutions should
be taken
to combat these
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issues
.
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First of all
, implementing available laws for
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frauding
would
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be remedy
.
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Because
,
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customers
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often
feel cheated as
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buy
fake brand's products. Or
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sometimes
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goods
may be unworthy for their expenditure on low quality ones which they
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bought
.
Therefore
, if authorities legislate against frauds, then these fake
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companies
would be
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stopped
.
Furthermore
, educating populace about the hazards of the technology and how become healthy. Provided that
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people
visit markets in person, they could
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buy
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goods
as they want, and
also
they could be active.

In conclusion
,
as a result
of increasing the number of
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customers
who
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shop
online,
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some
problems pose such as
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frauding
and health
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issues
.
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But
in order to tackle them braking in laws for fake merchandises and teaching
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people
the advantages of going
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shop
in person would
be suggested
.
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IELTS essay Currently, most companies are accustomed to selling their products through electronically connected networks with the coming of the internet.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
291 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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