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In the contemporary world,social networks significantly changed our lives.Yet,there are some disagreement whether technologies are positive or negative.While there are exactly valid arguments to the contrary.I personally believe that the benefits of the internet far out its drawbacks. These benefits are twofold.

In the contemporary world, social networks significantly changed our lives. Yet, there are some disagreement whether technologies are positive or negative. While there are exactly valid arguments to the contrary. I personally believe that the benefits of the internet far out its drawbacks. These benefits are twofold. 9lNX7

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