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In spite of the advance made in agriculture, many people around the world still so hungry.

In spite of the advance made in agriculture, many people around the world still so hungry. bjO6

In the present time, most of people are doing farming in India. A number of individuals farmers. Because of, in the previous time all people farmers and they mostly was doing this and the same thing do In the present time. Many tunes of crops grow in the land but even if several people around the nation still hungry. I will eleborate in my looming paragraphs. To begin with firstly, farmers are very hard working but thus, they donot get good profit from this work. The sell crops, Vegetables and so on in the orchard markets. but shopkeeper gave little money to the farmers and the sell high rate in the markets. poor massive cannot purchase this because of all vegetables and eater vasta rate has so high.

In the present time, most of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are The usual collocation for an activity ending in "-ing" is "go" not "do" or "play." Revise: "going farming".going farming
doing farming
 in India. A number of individuals You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrancherpeasantlaborerproducergrower
farmers
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 of, in the previous time all This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).farmers, and
farmers and
 they mostly
Use third-person plural verb with 'they': "are", "were".arewere
was
 doing this and the same thing do In the present time. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
Many
 tunes of crops grow in the land This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 even if several This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 around the nation still
 hungry. I will Possible spelling mistake found.elaborate
eleborate
 in my looming paragraphs. To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with firstly
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrancherpeasantlaborerproducergrower
farmers
 are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.hard-workinghardworking
hard working
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
thus
, they Possible spelling mistake found.donordo not
donot
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 profit from this work. The sell crops, Vegetables and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 on in the orchard markets. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterBut
but
 shopkeeper gave This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 money to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrancherpeasantlaborerproducergrower
farmers
 and the sell high rate in the markets. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterPoor
poor
 massive cannot This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 this This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of all vegetables and eater Possible spelling mistake found.vastpastaVestavistaVISTARasta
vasta
 rate has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 high. 