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in some parts of words it's becoming increasingly popular to try to find out about family history is this a negative or positive development

in some parts of words it's becoming increasingly popular to try to find out about family history is this a negative or positive development d3p7o
In today's global society researching the ancestral past of the family is becoming famous. Individuals wanted to do this in order to know the inheritance of one's own self. In my opinion finding and knowing about their family history background has a positive outcome. To begin with, searching out once on installed background will help to realise the skills, which is essential from our ancestors. This skill can be utilised for a growth in professional as well as personal life. Additionally, skills are hereditary, it can be interesting for people know who all carrying the similar skill get from previous generation. Moreover, the most popular reason to find out about family histories of under to The curiosity of learning own's origin. This is because of the reason that due to the some family migrated abroad in order to reach lavish lifestyle, resulted them loosing their original culture and inherited the culture of the country they moved in. For example, there are many international families in Australia hire geologist to find their family past background. on the other hand, this is an advantageous trend of researching about family history. One often needs to spend an evident amount of money to higher history especially to conduct this type of research. In addition, it often takes a lot of time and resources besides genealogy may play a vital role in maintaining the route of royal families. To conclude, although I believe that learning the past background of family may bring valuable information that has offspring to understand their custom and culture. This can also be a fruitful in growing with future prospective.
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family
is becoming
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. Individuals wanted to do this in order to know the inheritance of one's
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own
self. In my opinion finding and knowing about their
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family
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history
background has a
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positive
outcome.

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with, searching out once on installed background will
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help
to
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realise
the
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skills
, which is essential from our ancestors. This
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skill
can be
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utilised
for a growth in professional
as well
as personal life.
Additionally
,
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skills
are hereditary, it can be interesting for
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people
know who all carrying the similar
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skill
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get
from previous generation.

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, the most popular reason to find out about
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family
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histories
of under to The curiosity of learning
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of the reason that due to the
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some
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family
migrated abroad in order to reach lavish lifestyle, resulted them loosing their original culture and inherited the culture of the country they
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moved
in.
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, there are
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international
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families
in Australia hire geologist to find their
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family
past background.

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on
the other hand, this is an advantageous trend of researching about
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family
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history
. One
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needs to spend an evident amount of money to higher
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history
especially
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, it
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takes
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besides
genealogy may play a vital role in maintaining the route of royal families.

To conclude
, although I believe that learning the past background of
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family
may bring valuable information that has offspring to understand their custom and culture. This can
also
be a fruitful in growing with future prospective.
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IELTS essay in some parts of words it's becoming increasingly popular to try to find out about family history is this a negative or positive development

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
269 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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