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IN SOME COUNTRY , MORE AND MORE PEOPLE ARE BECOMING INTERESTED IN FINDING ABOUT THE HISTORY OF THE HOUSE OR BUILDING THEY LIVE IN

IN SOME COUNTRY, MORE AND MORE PEOPLE ARE BECOMING INTERESTED IN FINDING ABOUT THE HISTORY OF THE HOUSE OR BUILDING THEY LIVE IN N3NQj
THESE DAYS MAJORITY OF THE PEOPLE ARE TEND TO FIND PAST ABOUT HOUSE AND BUILDINGS THAT THEY ARE LIVE IN. THERE ARE VARIOUS REASON TO THIS. IN THIS EASSAY I AM GOING TO DISCUSS REASONS AND METHODS HOW HUMAN CAN FIND ABOUT HISTORY. NOWADAYS POPULATION ENGAGING TO STUDY OF THE PAST OF THE CONSTRUCTIONS THAT THEY ARE GOING TO PURCHASE. IT IS VERY GOOD METHOD BECAUSE WHEN WE BUY A PROPERTY WE SPEND ENAMOURS MONEY AND INDIVIDUALS HOPE TO SETTLE IN THERE FOR A LONG TIME. IN THIS SITUATION HUMAN BEINGS SHOULD RESEACH ABOUT THE BULIDINGS. MOST OF THE TIME PEOPLE ARE INTERESITNG TO STUDY ABOUT DEEDS, WHAT ARE THE TECHNIQUE WAS USED TO BUILD THE HOUSES, ARCHTECTURAL METHODS, MATERIALS THAT WERE USED KIND OF THINGS WE CAN ENGAGE. TO FIND OUT ABOUT PAST OF THE PROPERTY HUMAN CAN USE DEEDS, INFORMATION CAN BE ASKED FROM NEIGHBOURS, INFORMATION REGARDING MATERIAL CAN BE TAKEN FROM WORKES THOSE WERE BUILDINGS WERE MADE. NOT ONLY THEM BUT ALSO THERE ARE SOME PLACES TO TAKE INFORMATION ABOUT THE PROPERTIES IN GOVERNMENT. WE CAN GO THERE ALSO. OVERALL IT MAY BE SAID IN THE PRESENT MOST INDIVIDUALS HAS ENTHASASIUM TO KNOW ABOUT THE HISTORY OF THE HOUSES OR PROPERTIES THAT THEY ARE GOING TO LIVE OR THEY ARE LIVE IN.
THESE DAYS MAJORITY OF THE
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PEOPLE
ARE
Consider using a past participle here: "tended".
TEND
TO FIND PAST ABOUT
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HOUSE
AND BUILDINGS THAT THEY ARE
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LIVE
IN. THERE ARE VARIOUS REASON TO THIS. IN THIS
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EASSAY
I AM GOING TO DISCUSS REASONS AND METHODS HOW HUMAN CAN FIND ABOUT HISTORY. NOWADAYS POPULATION ENGAGING TO STUDY OF THE PAST OF THE CONSTRUCTIONS THAT THEY ARE GOING TO
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PURCHASE
. IT IS
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VERY
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GOOD
METHOD
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BECAUSE
WHEN WE
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BUY
A
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PROPERTY
WE SPEND
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ENAMOURS
MONEY AND INDIVIDUALS HOPE TO SETTLE IN THERE FOR A LONG TIME. IN THIS SITUATION HUMAN BEINGS SHOULD
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RESEACH
ABOUT THE
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BULIDINGS
. MOST OF THE TIME
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PEOPLE
ARE
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INTERESITNG
TO STUDY ABOUT DEEDS, WHAT ARE THE TECHNIQUE WAS
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USED
TO BUILD THE
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HOUSES
,
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ARCHTECTURAL
METHODS, MATERIALS THAT WERE
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USED
KIND OF THINGS WE CAN ENGAGE.

TO FIND OUT ABOUT PAST OF THE
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PROPERTY
HUMAN CAN
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USE
DEEDS, INFORMATION CAN
BE ASKED
FROM
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NEIGHBOURS
, INFORMATION REGARDING MATERIAL CAN
BE TAKEN
FROM
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WORKES
THOSE WERE BUILDINGS
WERE MADE
. NOT
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ONLY
THEM
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BUT
ALSO
THERE ARE
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SOME
PLACES TO TAKE INFORMATION ABOUT THE
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PROPERTIES
IN
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GOVERNMENT
. WE CAN GO THERE
ALSO
.

OVERALL
IT MAY
BE SAID
IN THE PRESENT MOST INDIVIDUALS HAS
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ENTHASASIUM
TO KNOW ABOUT THE HISTORY OF THE
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HOUSES
OR
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PROPERTIES
THAT THEY ARE GOING TO
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LIVE
OR THEY ARE
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LIVE
IN.
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IELTS essay IN SOME COUNTRY, MORE AND MORE PEOPLE ARE BECOMING INTERESTED IN FINDING ABOUT THE HISTORY OF THE HOUSE OR BUILDING THEY LIVE IN

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
215 words
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