It is sometimes argued that in countries which the unemployed phenomenon is prevalent, they should be only offered basic education. While I agree with this point of view, I do not believe that further education is not necessary for them.
To embark on, people who have no career prospects should be only received elementary education. On the individual level, they do not need to be consumed with learning because secondary education will not assist them in life. For example, natural subjects or social subjects in secondary school do not relate to those who will have no hope of finding jobs. From the economic perspective, the fee which is paid for studying will reduce and people can use that buck to support a family. Moreover, the government will replace the investment of the basic services in education to other fields.
However, the personal and economic arguments given above can be seen as the opposite angle. Firstly, the criminal activities often arise from the increased number in people who dropped out of school. As a result, not only the unemployment rate is increased, but also highly wrong acts. Secondly, countries where the index of educational development is low, they will be obsolete and perhaps leading to the serious consequence that is invaded by other countries. Therefore, this trend is becoming a negative one.
In conclusion, the idea of just learning primary education has both positive and detrimental effects on society, individuals and on the economy.
It is
sometimes
argued that in countries which the unemployed phenomenon is prevalent, they should be
only
offered basic
education
. While I
agree
with this point of view, I do not believe that
further
education
is not necessary for them.
To embark on,
people
who have no career prospects should be
only
received elementary
education
. On the individual level, they do not need to
be consumed
with learning
because
secondary
education
will not assist them in life.
For example
, natural subjects or social subjects in secondary school do not relate to those who will have no hope of finding jobs. From the economic perspective, the fee which
is paid
for studying will
reduce
and
people
can
use
that buck to support a family.
Moreover
, the
government
will replace the investment of the basic services in
education
to other fields.
However
, the personal and economic arguments
given
above can be
seen
as the opposite angle.
Firstly
, the criminal activities
often
arise from the increased number in
people
who dropped out of school.
As a result
, not
only
the unemployment rate
is increased
,
but
also
highly
wrong
acts.
Secondly
, countries where the index of educational development is low, they will be obsolete and perhaps leading to the serious consequence that
is invaded
by other countries.
Therefore
, this trend is becoming a
negative
one.
In conclusion
, the
idea
of
just
learning primary
education
has both
positive
and detrimental effects on society, individuals and on the economy.
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