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In some countries wedding caremonies are becoming bigger and more expensive than in the past why do you think this is case Is this a positive or negative development

In some countries wedding caremonies are becoming bigger and more expensive than in the past why do you think this is case Is this a positive or negative development DqYeE
Undenaiably present scenario in some countries wedding caremonies are becoming bigger and more expensive in past I think is negative effects an poor peopleTo begin with some people spend on marriage which they do copy second person than they waste of money after that they face all problem sometimes they make plan out of their as a result they fight in house not only but they show state because if one person do marriage in palace than second person imitate apart from this they lost money for example people do show state
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IELTS essay In some countries wedding caremonies are becoming bigger and more expensive than in the past why do you think this is case Is this a positive or negative development

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  American English
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