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In some countries people waste lot of food that they buy from restaurants and hotels. Why this is?what can we do to solve this problem?

In some countries people waste lot of food that they buy from restaurants and hotels. Why this is? what can we do to solve this problem? Lw1BG
In recent time wastage of unconsumed food purchased from hotels and restaurants are becoming a serious issue. Although a plethora of reasons are there, yet some sensible solutions are available to overcome this problem. In this essay, I will analyse some relevant problems and suggest some solutions as well. To begin with one of the most significant reason for the issue is people want to taste different delicious meals. But in the end, it becomes difficult for them to finish the food. For instance people take various delicacies during buffet in order to taste. This action leads to overexpenditure and wastage of food which is a big problem. Secondly the absence of strict regulation to stop food waste is another major reason which results in throwing away of food. In order to solve this problem some measures can be taken. Firstly Hotel owners should give reduced amount of food during buffet to avoid this situation. In addition, they can serve the food once the plate is empty. Furthermore, more proper awareness should be given to the people about negative impacts of throwing away food. Finally government can implement strict rules and regulations to control this ongoing issue. To conclude, people themselves have to realise the detrimental effects and issues of wastage of food and make efforts in that direction to overcome this circumstance which can lead our society to Famine if it continues for a long time in future and make efforts to reduce the problem.
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some
sensible solutions are available to overcome this
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with one of the most significant reason for the issue is
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people
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delicious meals.
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end
, it becomes difficult for them to finish the
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food
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take various delicacies during buffet in order to taste. This action leads to
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overexpenditure
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food
which is a
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waste is another major reason which results in throwing away of food.

In order to solve this
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Hotel owners should give
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reduced
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during buffet to avoid this situation.
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once the plate is empty.
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can implement strict
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rules
and regulations to control this ongoing issue.

To conclude
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themselves
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realise
the detrimental effects and issues of wastage of
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food
and
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make
efforts in that direction to overcome this circumstance which can lead our society to Famine if it continues for a long time in future and
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IELTS essay In some countries people waste lot of food that they buy from restaurants and hotels. Why this is? what can we do to solve this problem?

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  American English
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246 words
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