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dairy products are good or bad , paragraph vs passage

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The passage and the speaker both address the same topic, however; in the opposite side of the spectrum. While the passage discusses the benefits, the speaker lists the benefits. First, as opposing to the passage, the writer draw attention to the harmful sides of dairy products, supporting his claim with fact that dairy products increase Christ role risk as they contain high saturated fat level. He also provides alternatives, such as oil, nuts and avocados that contains superior nutrients than dairy products Next, the speaker states that as humans grow up, their ability to digest dairy products starts to diminish. In contrast, the passage provides evidence that digesting dairy products has been helpful over the years. Finally, the passage argues that dairy products are environmentally friendly because they are organic. On the contrary, raising cows produce greenhouse emissions that contribute to climate change- that is the speaker reasons for considering dairy products damaging to the environment.
The
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passage
and the speaker both address the same topic,
however
; in the opposite side of the spectrum. While the
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passage
discusses the benefits, the speaker lists the benefits.

First
, as opposing to the
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passage
, the writer draw attention to the harmful sides of
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dairy
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products
, supporting his claim with fact that
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dairy
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products
increase Christ role
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risk
as they contain high saturated
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fat
level. He
also
provides alternatives, such as oil, nuts and avocados that contains superior nutrients than
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dairy
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products


Next
, the speaker states that as humans grow up, their ability to digest
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dairy
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products
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starts
to diminish.
In contrast
, the
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passage
provides evidence that digesting
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dairy
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products
has been helpful over the years.

Finally
, the
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passage
argues that
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dairy
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products
are
environmentally
friendly
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because
they are organic.
On the contrary
, raising cows produce greenhouse emissions that contribute to climate
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change
-
that is
the speaker reasons for considering
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dairy
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products
damaging to the environment.
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IELTS essay dairy products are good or bad, paragraph vs passage

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
156 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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