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with
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and
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. Husband
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in the world is not
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to you
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my friends and
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IELTS essay Many people believe that

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
97 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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