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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might be this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

One of the most controversial debates of these days is living property; while some people consider leasing a flat is better option, others assert the opposite. I strongly support the idiosyncrasy of buying your private house. First and foremost, owning a house benefits a person economically. Of course, some people may think renting a house is cheaper, but the latter option proves to be more beneficial on commercial grounds in the long run. Exorbitant rents must be paid for tiny flats, which even country hens would disdain to live in. For instance, statistics taken from Tokyo citizens state that about half of their salary is spend on rents. Furthermore, economic crises are growing day in, day out, especially during corona virus pandemic and having your personal house will assure with financial aid. Another point worth considering is about a person’s comfort zone, especially that person is self indulgent. Living in a rental house doesn’t prove much freedom as many people feel. As a proof, a tenant needs the permission of the landlords even to drill a hole in the wall, but this is not the case in your personal property. Moreover, sometimes proprietor might be an rude person and possibly, someone would not relish living in the house of tactless person. To summarize, although some people contemplate that renting a house is better option, economic prosperity and freedom of the will are the main reasons resulting in the popularization of home ownership in few countries. I believe having your permanent living area is the best idea.
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consider leasing a flat is better option, others assert the opposite. I
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support the idiosyncrasy of buying your private
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and foremost, owning a
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benefits a
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person
economically
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think
renting a
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is cheaper,
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the latter option proves to be more beneficial on commercial grounds in the long run. Exorbitant rents
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must
be paid
for tiny flats, which even country hens would disdain to
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live
in.
For instance
, statistics taken from Tokyo citizens state that about half of their salary is
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spend
on rents.
Furthermore
, economic crises are growing day in, day out,
especially
during
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corona virus
pandemic and having your personal
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house
will assure with financial aid.

Another point worth considering is about a
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person’s
comfort zone,
especially
that
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is
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self indulgent
.
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Living
in a rental
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house
doesn’t prove much freedom as
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feel. As a proof, a tenant needs the permission of the landlords even to drill a hole in the wall,
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this is not the case in your personal property.
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,
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proprietor might be
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an
rude
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and
possibly
, someone would not relish
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in the
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of tactless person.

To summarize
, although
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contemplate that renting a
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is better option, economic prosperity and freedom of the will are the main reasons resulting in the popularization of
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home ownership
in few countries. I believe having your permanent
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living
area is the best
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IELTS essay In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might be this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
256 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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